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child of sin
the day was delicate
as her pink blush rose on the horizon
I felt her desire to just be
she was beautiful in this state
gentle of mood
I was like-minded
quietly I entered her atmosphere
dancing in the easy waves
cosmically in tune
with her ethereal frequency
I was in deep need
my heart hurt
my body broken
I ache...
she witnessed my pain
she took mercy on me;
allowing me inside her hidden chambers
where the glaring sun
over judgment couldn't reach me
yes the day protected me
she mothered a child of sin
who lost her way in the darkness
Published 22nd Jan 2019
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22nd Jan 2019 2:08pm
Beautiful spill Brenda!👏
Really dig this piece and the lovely message
Love this Fabulous verse,
"quietly I entered her atmosphere
dancing in her easy waves
cosmically in tune
with her ethereal frequency "
Truly wonderful👏
Really dig this piece and the lovely message
Love this Fabulous verse,
"quietly I entered her atmosphere
dancing in her easy waves
cosmically in tune
with her ethereal frequency "
Truly wonderful👏
22nd Jan 2019 2:09pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for feeling the vibe of this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
22nd Jan 2019 3:34pm
22nd Jan 2019 3:50pm
where the glaring sun
over judgment couldn't reach me
Unconditionality....the skeleton key...
over judgment couldn't reach me
Unconditionality....the skeleton key...
22nd Jan 2019 5:05pm
''yes the day protected me
she mothered a child of sin
who lost her way in the darkness ''
as always..beautifully expressed...
she mothered a child of sin
who lost her way in the darkness ''
as always..beautifully expressed...
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2019 5:07pm
Wow, Crimmy, what beautiful prose. Only from such a beautiful heart could come such beautiful words.
You're truly gifted, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
You're truly gifted, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
22nd Jan 2019 6:25pm
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22nd Jan 2019 6:30pm
This is a very warm piece offering comfort to those of us who feel a little broken. Thank you.
22nd Jan 2019 9:36pm
A soothing and beautiful write Brenda. My favorite lines:
quietly I entered her atmosphere
dancing in the easy waves
cosmically in tune
with her ethereal frequency
You really have a way with the cosmos. Truly fine work.
quietly I entered her atmosphere
dancing in the easy waves
cosmically in tune
with her ethereal frequency
You really have a way with the cosmos. Truly fine work.
23rd Jan 2019 2:05am
23rd Jan 2019 2:10am
Dearest Brenda so amazing and depth of your inner thoughts and emotions.🌺
As always spellbinding as you read your ink. 😁💐
You are such a great poetress of expressing your self openly drawing us in with you with each word you ink. 👏
Magnificent this ink is I must add it to my RL. 🌹
Thomas🐺
As always spellbinding as you read your ink. 😁💐
You are such a great poetress of expressing your self openly drawing us in with you with each word you ink. 👏
Magnificent this ink is I must add it to my RL. 🌹
Thomas🐺
23rd Jan 2019 2:59pm
23rd Jan 2019 4:10pm
Beautifully tragic but inspirational. Forgive my ignorance but I did not discover if it was a mother or mother nature's love. Either way a powerful write Brenda. Dx
23rd Jan 2019 4:13pm
thank you graciously dearest David for feeling this write...this is a tricky one here I personified the day its self so day mothered me...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
24th Jan 2019 00:43am
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2019 4:43pm
I keep going over the concept of a child of sin. Makes my mind spin in circles, arguing with itself. You always have a special way of expression that catches me slightly off-guard and makes me think. Always a beautiful thing to receive nourishment. I love you, my beautiful Dark Angel...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
29th Jan 2019 12:08pm
This was magnificent Crim. While the setting can be anywhere the sun wraps you in its healing warmth; I myself pictured a field of wild flowers, both children of light and dark lift their heads in exaltation, no judgement just being.
