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Crystalline Nights
The frosty nights are crystalline: they're clear
As golden thoughts, exclusive to my head;
I thank you with a smile: could this endear
Me more to you, as we fuck in your bed?
If I efface myself as we make love,
You'll find reflections mirrored; if you look
Into my shadowed pupils from above,
Is just a glimpse enough? It's all you took;
You'd have it all, but I gave it away:
The rhythm of love making is enough;
You give me your permission and you stay
Quite still, but you can seldom call my bluff;
Yet would you really want to? I'll devise
Such slow and graceful movements; they're designed
As music for these moments, when my eyes
Adore you on clear nights we've both defined.
As golden thoughts, exclusive to my head;
I thank you with a smile: could this endear
Me more to you, as we fuck in your bed?
If I efface myself as we make love,
You'll find reflections mirrored; if you look
Into my shadowed pupils from above,
Is just a glimpse enough? It's all you took;
You'd have it all, but I gave it away:
The rhythm of love making is enough;
You give me your permission and you stay
Quite still, but you can seldom call my bluff;
Yet would you really want to? I'll devise
Such slow and graceful movements; they're designed
As music for these moments, when my eyes
Adore you on clear nights we've both defined.
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Re. Crystalline Nights
17th Jan 2019 2:00am
there is a wild desire hidden within the lines
as passion is free as a breeze
loushs write
as passion is free as a breeze
loushs write
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Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
18th Jan 2019 8:53pm
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17th Jan 2019 2:04am
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18th Jan 2019 8:54pm
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17th Jan 2019 2:15am
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18th Jan 2019 8:54pm
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17th Jan 2019 2:42am
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18th Jan 2019 8:56pm
Re. Crystalline Nights
17th Jan 2019 6:22am
Like a warm breeze flowing from your pen, desire seeps through every line.
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18th Jan 2019 8:58pm
Re. Crystalline Nights
17th Jan 2019 6:50am
Both romantic and erotic. Picture helps build the sense of anticipation of the lovemaking to come.
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18th Jan 2019 8:59pm
Re. Crystalline Nights
17th Jan 2019 8:38am
Very vivid depth of romantic passion and erotic imagery and emotions.
Well done loved your ink dear.😊🌺
Wolfman🐺💐
Well done loved your ink dear.😊🌺
Wolfman🐺💐
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Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
18th Jan 2019 8:52pm
Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
So do I, my lady, I am a die hard romantic. I have fear romance is dying! 😢
More people want a quick drive through sex than deep home romance to take care of their emotional and physical cravings.🌺
Wolfman🐺
More people want a quick drive through sex than deep home romance to take care of their emotional and physical cravings.🌺
Wolfman🐺
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Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
18th Jan 2019 11:47pm
Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
19th Jan 2019 1:07am
Totally agree with you dear.😊
Unconditionally accepting everlasting one and only.🌹
Little moments shared as important as great moments spent with each other.😊💐
Have a beautiful weekend dear friend.🌺
Wolfman🐺
Unconditionally accepting everlasting one and only.🌹
Little moments shared as important as great moments spent with each other.😊💐
Have a beautiful weekend dear friend.🌺
Wolfman🐺
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Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
19th Jan 2019 11:04am
Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
19th Jan 2019 11:42pm
Yes UNCONDITIONAL LOVE is very rare.🌹
When you hear of couples together for 40 years or more is a beautiful example of LOVING another unconditionally.😉🌺
Would make a fantastic theme my lady.😊👏
Wolfman🐺
When you hear of couples together for 40 years or more is a beautiful example of LOVING another unconditionally.😉🌺
Would make a fantastic theme my lady.😊👏
Wolfman🐺
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Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
20th Jan 2019 00:00am
It is not something I have experienced - but I get the idea - over to you sir?
Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
20th Jan 2019 00:37am
UNCONDITIONAL love is LOVING without reservation...no demands how to love...uninhibited pleasuring each other...complete trust...able to totally be ones self without fearing you will be judge...sharing your mind heart and wants openly and freely not each other dear😊😉🌹😁
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
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Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
20th Jan 2019 00:40am
Re: Re. Crystalline Nights
20th Jan 2019 00:46am
Yes complete trust in each other UNCONDITIONALLY...
You need not be so formal by saying sir. I admire your politeness, you can call me Wolf or Thomas will be fine dear.😊
Wolfman🐺
You need not be so formal by saying sir. I admire your politeness, you can call me Wolf or Thomas will be fine dear.😊
Wolfman🐺
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