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soul seduction
come inside my sacred halls
feel the depths of me
reserved for kings
not meant for mortal seduction
drink my passion
get drunk off my feelings
then come and lie with me
commingling souls
bare of worldly armor
sharing secrets of intimacy
as we enter one another
a celestial meeting of body and mind
we caress each other going deep
your soul's flavor
intoxicates my senses
sends me to the sixth dimension
this is an otherworldly seduction
you kiss me gently
and I open to you completely
all my hidden selves come into view
you see the tender girl
the streetwise tease
the lovely lady I am
you whisper come into me
lapping at my mind and spirit
you invite me to know you
the real you...
safely kept from prying eyes
a private view for just you and I
we dance the dance of true lovers
coming together in the shadows
where no one can touch us
enter my lust I trust you...
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Re. soul seduction
Anonymous
13th Jan 2019 4:17pm
Beautifully, erotically, passionately said. I try to express my desire, burning passion, erotic and sensual nature - and it comes out sounding juvenile. You did a beautiful job.
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Re: Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 4:18pm
thank you graciously dearest Killhope I'm sure you are a wonderful poet I'll have to check you out... welcome to my pages...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 4:17pm
Lovely write Brenda!👏 i dig these universally seductive vibes👏
"as we enter one another
a celestial meeting of body and mind
we caress each other going deep"
Beautifully penned love this!
Excellent piece!
"as we enter one another
a celestial meeting of body and mind
we caress each other going deep"
Beautifully penned love this!
Excellent piece!
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Re: Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 4:20pm
thank you dearest Hunter
I believe in sex of the soul
combined with physical oneness
is out of this world...
so happy you like this...
love Brenda 🌹
I believe in sex of the soul
combined with physical oneness
is out of this world...
so happy you like this...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 4:51pm
Re: Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 4:54pm
thank you graciously dearest Tender One I love hearing from you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
13th Jan 2019 5:15pm
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Re: Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 5:29pm
thank you graciously dearest Ego I've experienced some strange things in my life this being one of them... howbeit a beautiful experience...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 5:43pm
Seduction of the soul indeed. A beautiful write Crimsin. I feel the passion in your ink.
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Re: Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 5:44pm
thank you graciously dearest DeadPoet for feeling this so deeply...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 6:27pm
Your poetry speaks of great wisdom and knowledge on the truth of love. Beautiful.
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Re: Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 6:33pm
thank you graciously dearest RJM for the love on this write...you gifted me smiles today...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. soul seduction
Anonymous
13th Jan 2019 10:00pm
So deeply felt is this awesome piece
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Re: Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 10:01pm
thank you graciously dearest Ragnar so happy you felt this one...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. soul seduction
13th Jan 2019 10:36pm
Another excellent poem, Brenda. My favorite lines:
you see the tender girl
the streetwise tease
the lovely lady I am
You are indeed multifaceted, but I'll stick with the lovely lady that you are. It shows in your work.
you see the tender girl
the streetwise tease
the lovely lady I am
You are indeed multifaceted, but I'll stick with the lovely lady that you are. It shows in your work.
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Re. soul seduction
14th Jan 2019 2:03am
Re. soul seduction
14th Jan 2019 1:32pm
"the real you" ... oh to find that person ... I have been fooled ... to many times ... beautiful write my poetess ... swept me up ... and away ...
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Re. soul seduction
Anonymous
14th Jan 2019 6:42pm
Crimmy,
Really wonderful writing. It's sensual, but in an otherworldly way, exposing the beauty, and passion of your being.
Love you, my friend.
Matthew.
Really wonderful writing. It's sensual, but in an otherworldly way, exposing the beauty, and passion of your being.
Love you, my friend.
Matthew.
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Re. soul seduction
16th Jan 2019 8:23am
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
17th Jan 2019 12:46pm
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Re. soul seduction
16th Feb 2019 8:07pm
Ahhh .. truly a divine blessed write ... King other wordly seduction lust soul trust ... Blessed write ... sets my mind alight ... Bless and love ...
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