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...U...
funny...how a simple drop
in a pond can cause enigmatic ripples
and evoke devotion
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spell casting.....everlasting
makes me wonder
how long have i been fasting?
...
i swear baby
i didn't know how hungry i was
until i met you..
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Published 13th Jan 2019
| Edited 20th Jan 2019
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13th Jan 2019 2:50pm
13th Jan 2019 3:05pm
dearest Naajir I can feel the deep desire here
passionate need...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
passionate need...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
13th Jan 2019 3:46pm
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Anonymous
14th Jan 2019 1:57pm
This is one of those poems that sinks deep into the soul and wraps one up in its beauty and emotion. Definitely well worth reading again...and again...
15th Jan 2019 4:08am
16th Jan 2019 7:54am
Anonymous
20th Jan 2019 7:20am
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
22nd Jan 2019 6:34am
23rd Jan 2019 2:47am
Very nice, Naajir! This is exactly what contrast is for - show us what we don't want that we recognize what we do when it presents itself. When the student is ready the teacher will appear.
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
23rd Jan 2019 10:57am
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Anonymous
31st Jan 2019 11:42am
The journey of discovery includes elimination… but then we really are ready and awakened.
Beautiful Naaj
Beautiful Naaj
5th Apr 2019 1:33pm
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