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fire light
in the fairy mist, I first saw her
playful minx full of fire
she stirred the air and all nature hushed
the Queen had entered the realm of the fey
long away among the mortals
doing good deeds and spreading cheer
she, at last, returned to walk among her kinfolk
the trees stoic and old
hold her memories and keep her secrets
they whispered she's home
with the rustling of their leaves
they tell her story
the fairies giggled
despite the stern glare of the sun
who admonished them
this was an important occasion
I sat among the ferns watching her silently
her magic was thick in the air
a spell was cast over me
her laugh was infectious
I smiled with my whole self
when the King of the realm presented me to her
you saw me through gentle eyes
overlooking my flaws
tender and loving
a nurturer of joy
it is your secret gift
you hide its flame in your sacred halls
so no matter the wind of turmoil blowing
it never goes out
it stays inside
sacred
you smile at me
I see the sun in your eyes
you are a being of pure beauty
all of nature rejoices with me
the Queen has returned
let the fairies make merry
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9th Jan 2019 5:19pm
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9th Jan 2019 7:38pm
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 5:21pm
Dearest Crimmy,
What a fantastic poem. When are you writing that fantasy novel?
You're so good, my friend. I wanted that to go on.
Awesome.
Love,
Matthew.
What a fantastic poem. When are you writing that fantasy novel?
You're so good, my friend. I wanted that to go on.
Awesome.
Love,
Matthew.
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9th Jan 2019 7:39pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew giggles a fantasy novel maybe someday the dialog scares me a little though...
love you my friend...
Brenda 🌹
love you my friend...
Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 7:42pm
Crimmy,
If something scares you, you usually face it, then beat the tar out of it, and then master it, so I'm sure it wouldn't be a problem for you, Warrior Writer. lol.
Love you, too,
Matthew.
If something scares you, you usually face it, then beat the tar out of it, and then master it, so I'm sure it wouldn't be a problem for you, Warrior Writer. lol.
Love you, too,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. fire light
9th Jan 2019 7:46pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew for your belief in my ability...I've done two characters at a time several shouldn't be too much harder...
you gifted me smiles dearest Matthew I deeply cherish you...
love Brenda 🌹
you gifted me smiles dearest Matthew I deeply cherish you...
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 7:50pm
Crimmy, I know you could do it, you're great, and one of the nicest people I've ever met. It's really been a nice friendship. It's helped me through a lot, so thank you.
Love,
Matthew.
And I want a signed copy of your book, please.
Love,
Matthew.
And I want a signed copy of your book, please.
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Re. fire light
9th Jan 2019 5:47pm
I'm definitely off with the fairies after reading this evocative imagery - lovely done. :))
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Re: Re. fire light
9th Jan 2019 7:40pm
thank you graciously dearest Josh I'm so happy this write spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. fire light
9th Jan 2019 6:46pm
Who is the foxy lady?
You always bring something fresh to the table.
Dark Sun.
You always bring something fresh to the table.
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. fire light
9th Jan 2019 7:41pm
thank you graciously dearest Dark Sun she is a lady who inspired me today with her beauty and kindness...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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9th Jan 2019 6:58pm
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9th Jan 2019 7:42pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim yes today is a good day... I'm happy the feeling this beautiful lady gave me was conveyed in this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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9th Jan 2019 7:45pm
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9th Jan 2019 7:49pm
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 8:39pm
What a beautiful woman she is. Your admiration for this lovely creature must be soul binding. Your words are a beautiful tribute my sweet one. She seems to be an inspiration to you. I'm pleased to see you so happy. Love. J
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9th Jan 2019 8:40pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis yes she is quite a lovely person... she touched my heart today and I was inspired to write... I'm happy you felt the joy in this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 8:41pm
This so completely captures the magik of the faerie realm and the beauty of their allure. Makes me want to go find a faerie mound and disappear from the world a while. I love you, my beautiful Dark Angel
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. fire light
9th Jan 2019 8:42pm
thank you beautiful Willow I'm only saddened you are feeling down... I'm going to message you...
I love you...
perhaps together we can find the entrance to this place today...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
perhaps together we can find the entrance to this place today...
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
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9th Jan 2019 9:05pm
thank you graciously dearest Ego I'm so happy you found entrance to this enchanted place while reading...
this lovely lady brought me to these special grounds today with her beautiful spirit...
love Brenda 🌹
this lovely lady brought me to these special grounds today with her beautiful spirit...
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
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9th Jan 2019 9:17pm
Re. fire light
9th Jan 2019 10:01pm
"you saw me through gentle eyes
overlooking my flaws'
Oh, if only we could always have such a person in times of need...a blessing indeed
lovely fire verses
Jeff
overlooking my flaws'
Oh, if only we could always have such a person in times of need...a blessing indeed
lovely fire verses
Jeff
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Re: Re. fire light
9th Jan 2019 10:10pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff yes it is refreshing indeed to be viewed so kindly...
I cherish you dear friend...
love Brenda 💕
I cherish you dear friend...
love Brenda 💕
Re. fire light
10th Jan 2019 00:10am
This wok and of woodland spirits was destined to meet you and share her EVERLASTING light and LOVE to you this day and many more to come my dearest Brenda...💐😊
She has open you a door you felt you had no key to but now her brightness has flung it open for you to walk in a room deep in your minds eye and depth if your heart...😊💗
For you to feel warmth and light...
To be inspired to put for ink of unimaginable beautiful IMAGERY and Mystical, Whimsical Fantasy of a book to inspire all in darkness to the light...🌈
You are bequeath as a Light bearer my Dearest Brenda...🌞
Love thomas 💕🐺
She has open you a door you felt you had no key to but now her brightness has flung it open for you to walk in a room deep in your minds eye and depth if your heart...😊💗
For you to feel warmth and light...
To be inspired to put for ink of unimaginable beautiful IMAGERY and Mystical, Whimsical Fantasy of a book to inspire all in darkness to the light...🌈
You are bequeath as a Light bearer my Dearest Brenda...🌞
Love thomas 💕🐺
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Re: Re. fire light
10th Jan 2019 00:15am
thank you graciously dearest Thomas she is a spirit of light and love... I'm happy you can see that through this write I've been led to this place before by other light spirits but have not been in some time...
I deeply cherish the beautiful thoughts you gifted me today dear poet I'm beaming here...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply cherish the beautiful thoughts you gifted me today dear poet I'm beaming here...
love Brenda 💕
Re. fire light
10th Jan 2019 1:16am
You have a wonderful way with fantasy, Brenda, truly inspired. Like others above, I'd love to see your talent showcased in a novel, or short story. Your way with words transcends any form.
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Re: Re. fire light
10th Jan 2019 1:26am
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow I have to admit a novel intimidates me perhaps someday... you make me smiles with the beautiful thoughts you feel me with...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕