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you are the sun, flowing the soulfire within
congregated white lotus laps
of pournami night, cradling
our birthed twins, in its
paradisiacal succulence
& fanning lullabies, pour their
cupped palms with sandalwood
streams over the bronzed
third eye armoured
warriors in communion
phenomenally unravel in a magnetic drift
catalyzed by our consensual resilience
of a destiny-sculptured heroic future
from the redflagged tenures of an abandoned physicality
in heavily tangled inserts- the grandiloquent pricking stillborn
of a parallel reality dubiously cemented within, those
flourishing fugitives corrode with fuming furious pasts
arid past lands,
in their uncanny unchartered semblence
intently gaze the dissipating runaway skies in frenzied pleas
with their rampantly bulleted mesh of hung skeletal canopies
inflicting cancerous selves in their echoing hollow discourse
never ever transpires that ached singlet of a golden droplet
in a forever slenderly elongating finely threaded connectivity
for a rapturous rhapsody, an explosive hatch out
to oceanic infinities, dotted with our vermilion breaths
in clashing rendezvous with the stiffened reef lips
eagle-spirited births in stuttered flight
of flashed escape orbits, shed fast many
ejected out minute diamond winglets
from their clutched interlocking feathers
swaying in a cosmically reverberating
ultrasonic silence of our consciousness
Published 7th Jan 2019
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2019 6:12pm
your words blow me away....
7th Jan 2019 6:38pm
Wowo just wow
Masterfully written uma!
You're a deep poetess with an amazing skill of wordsmithing👏👏
Love every bit of this write!
"never ever transpires that ached singlet of a golden droplet
in a forever slenderly elongating finely threaded connectivity
for a rapturous rhapsody, an explosive hatch out
to oceanic infinities, dotted with our vermilion breaths
in clashing rendezvous with the stiffened reef lips"
Phenomenal! This is like another level right here👏👏👏
And the ending lines are so beautifully written,
"swaying in a cosmically reverberating
ultrasonic silence of our consciousness"
Profound and awesome!
Masterfully written uma!
You're a deep poetess with an amazing skill of wordsmithing👏👏
Love every bit of this write!
"never ever transpires that ached singlet of a golden droplet
in a forever slenderly elongating finely threaded connectivity
for a rapturous rhapsody, an explosive hatch out
to oceanic infinities, dotted with our vermilion breaths
in clashing rendezvous with the stiffened reef lips"
Phenomenal! This is like another level right here👏👏👏
And the ending lines are so beautifully written,
"swaying in a cosmically reverberating
ultrasonic silence of our consciousness"
Profound and awesome!
7th Jan 2019 8:22pm
"of pournami night, cradling
our birthed twins, in its
paradisiacal succulence
& fanning lullabies, pour their
cupped palms with sandalwood
streams over the bronzed
third eye armoured
warriors in communion"
Your words are magic...you flower beautiful heart onto the line of paper...and it blooms in my mind
love
Jeff
our birthed twins, in its
paradisiacal succulence
& fanning lullabies, pour their
cupped palms with sandalwood
streams over the bronzed
third eye armoured
warriors in communion"
Your words are magic...you flower beautiful heart onto the line of paper...and it blooms in my mind
love
Jeff
8th Jan 2019 4:29am
Oh Uma, I shall never walk away from one of your writes without a certain astonishment, and not before looking up at least one or two words I was unfamiliar with. lol. I do not say this as a complaint, as people often do when perusing my writes, as if learning a new word were a chore instead of an expansion of awareness and it's many tools within the qualia vocabulary, with which you erupt like a volcanic Picasso. Seriously, just contemplating your meanings is electric.
Daniel
Daniel
Incredibly descriptive and beautifully described. Beautiful poem, Summa!
29th Jan 2019 2:49pm
dearest poet NB.. love your user name..hope & sunshine there. glad you made it again here for a read...welcome to du & hope to read ur writes sooner..
5th Feb 2019 6:55am
this was fulfilling!
ah,love...dont ever stop.. you know i
had to render a visit into your world
Noire Rose aka Subnsets
ah,love...dont ever stop.. you know i
had to render a visit into your world
Noire Rose aka Subnsets
