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Fashionista! #8: The Factory🐾
(the Sixties never knew what hit it!)
The blinding of the walls,
Detection of the cracks.
The milling, mindless thoughts,
That play back countless acts
...Of decadence.
I come in unannounced,
With others just like me.
The only difference here,
I’m not a wannabe
...In residence.
I’m here to do my prowl,
I’m from the upper side.
They stare at me like owls,
Who haven’t any pride
...But arrogance!
I duck into the ‘loo,
With cocks drawn on the walls.
The foil is peeling glue,
While I shape-shift in all
...My elegance.
The Mistress of Disguise,
Who walks and looks askance,
As Billy Name cracks wise,
While Edie does her dance
...Spontaneous.
Then sudden from a crouch,
I leap from where I hide.
There’s Ondine on the couch,
Where he and I collide
...Inheritance!
But Ondine’s not my type,
He has an aftertaste.
And Nico‘s full of hype,
But Lou Reed’s brain contains
...No sustenance!
So who’s there left to eat?
No Velvet Underground.
Can’t hang here on the cheat,
There’s Warhol looking ‘round
...For evidence!
The blinding of the walls,
Detection of the cracks.
The milling, mindless thoughts,
That play back countless acts
...Of decadence.
I come in unannounced,
With others just like me.
The only difference here,
I’m not a wannabe
...In residence.
I’m here to do my prowl,
I’m from the upper side.
They stare at me like owls,
Who haven’t any pride
...But arrogance!
I duck into the ‘loo,
With cocks drawn on the walls.
The foil is peeling glue,
While I shape-shift in all
...My elegance.
The Mistress of Disguise,
Who walks and looks askance,
As Billy Name cracks wise,
While Edie does her dance
...Spontaneous.
Then sudden from a crouch,
I leap from where I hide.
There’s Ondine on the couch,
Where he and I collide
...Inheritance!
But Ondine’s not my type,
He has an aftertaste.
And Nico‘s full of hype,
But Lou Reed’s brain contains
...No sustenance!
So who’s there left to eat?
No Velvet Underground.
Can’t hang here on the cheat,
There’s Warhol looking ‘round
...For evidence!
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 2nd Jan 2019
| Edited 3rd Dec 2019
Author's Note
To fans of my original series of my shape-shifting Manhattan socialite, here is #8 in the on-going series of our favorite tiger predator - Fashionista!
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Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
2nd Jan 2019 10:01pm
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Why thank you, poet, and for the RL, I’m so pleased! If you ever want to read the sequels just let me know and I’ll pm you the links.**
**That that last part will have to wait. I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Jade
**That that last part will have to wait. I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Jade
Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
2nd Jan 2019 11:02pm
Could you number the series in your title somehow? That way I can find them in your poem list. (you have 500!) Impressive.
Don't have to if you're preserving integrity. :-)
Don't have to if you're preserving integrity. :-)
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Dear sister,
I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Jade x
I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Jade x
Re: Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
6th Jan 2019 7:48pm
Okay my dear,
All the installments are numbered in order, yaaay!
All you do is go to the alphabetical list of my published titles, go to Fashionista, and you’ll see them all listed numerically because all the chapters start with the same word: Fashionista!😘
All the installments are numbered in order, yaaay!
All you do is go to the alphabetical list of my published titles, go to Fashionista, and you’ll see them all listed numerically because all the chapters start with the same word: Fashionista!😘
Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
2nd Jan 2019 11:19pm
MMMMMM my priestess you truly have the animal spirit deep with in. Beautiful imagery with a nice erotic twist.😉💕🐺
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3rd Jan 2019 5:07am
I thank you, Priest, as my fur ripples while I pace from the scent, and the Reading List add.
Jade Tiger Priestess🐅
Jade Tiger Priestess🐅
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3rd Jan 2019 9:30am
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Re: Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
4th Jan 2019 10:21am
My Priestess wish you good health finds you even more...💊💐
No worries on answering me spirit prayers for THEE🙏 🌹
Wolf Priest 😊💕🐺
No worries on answering me spirit prayers for THEE🙏 🌹
Wolf Priest 😊💕🐺
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Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
2nd Jan 2019 11:26pm
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4th Jan 2019 10:17am
Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2019 11:30pm
Now that's cool, my friend.
Loved it, and all it's references.
You're a Prose-shifting Poet.
Love,
Matthew.
Loved it, and all it's references.
You're a Prose-shifting Poet.
Love,
Matthew.
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Puppy,
I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before, as you know.
I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before, as you know.
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 3:11pm
It's OK, Jadey, no need, just get yourself better, that's my main concern. I know you appreciate the comments.
Love,
Matthew.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
2nd Jan 2019 11:46pm
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Thank you deeply, my friend,
I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
3rd Jan 2019 00:29am
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4th Jan 2019 10:21am
Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
3rd Jan 2019 7:11am
And the tiger girls go,
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
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Thank you, Andy.., I love the melody that this brought to mind when I read your comment day before. However..,
I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Jadey x
I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Jadey x
Re. Fashionista!: The Factory
3rd Jan 2019 11:43pm
I particularly love the reference to the Velvet Underground. "Venus In Furs" is one of my favorite songs. Another great Fashionista!
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4th Jan 2019 10:36am
Thank you, dear friend.., you are one of Fashionista’s biggest fans.
Meantime, I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Jadey x
Meantime, I will get back to you: I fell very ill night before.
Jadey x
Re. Fashionista!: #8 The Factory
31st Jan 2019 3:22am
this is popping more than pop culture. now i see what the hype's all about. i wait with bated breath for the next installment!
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Re: Re. Fashionista!: #8 The Factory
Thank you so much for going through all the chapters, episodes or installment - whatever floats - which brought you up to speed and now you see the light!
As you also know of course, is that you helped inspire your’s truly into drop-kicking #9 in as a new addition to the saga! I still plan to have #10 written while I participate in this April’s NaPoWriMo, yaaaay!
As you also know of course, is that you helped inspire your’s truly into drop-kicking #9 in as a new addition to the saga! I still plan to have #10 written while I participate in this April’s NaPoWriMo, yaaaay!