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rainbow revival
the pain in your rainbow held me captive
I was a visitor on your plane of innocence
the stars in your eyes spoke to me of wisdom
my whiskey bottle of lies
was moonshine from straight from the devil's prick
you were a Baptist revival after my fall from grace
in your midnight sun, I found warmth
your hallelujahs fed me truth
there was safety in your arms
as the gray days bled with my soul
until that's all that was left
you entered and brought the color of love
I was lost and found by the light you shone
crucified in my sin
dead to old days
born again
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Re: Re. rainbow revival
3rd Jan 2019 2:17pm
thank you graciously dearest Bender for such a beautiful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. rainbow revival
2nd Jan 2019 11:32pm
Dearest Brenda you understand depth if imagery love and emotion far more than mere mortal. Your ink is more of the goddess of love passion emotions.🌹
You always leave me craving mire of your sensual passionate ink.😊😉💐
love Thomas 💕🐺
You always leave me craving mire of your sensual passionate ink.😊😉💐
love Thomas 💕🐺
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3rd Jan 2019 2:18pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas I'm greatly honored by your comment... I'm both beaming and blushing...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. rainbow revival
3rd Jan 2019 12:39pm
Love the combining of a rainbow and revival ... renewal ... I shall hence forth look at them that way ... another powerful write my poetess ...
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3rd Jan 2019 2:18pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly for seeing the meaning behind this poem...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2019 1:35pm
"as the gray days bled with my soul
until that's all that was left
you entered and brought the color of love"
Ahh, that's just beautiful. Love brings so many colours to our souls, doesn't it, my beautiful Dark Angel? I love you...
...ever our Willow
until that's all that was left
you entered and brought the color of love"
Ahh, that's just beautiful. Love brings so many colours to our souls, doesn't it, my beautiful Dark Angel? I love you...
...ever our Willow
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3rd Jan 2019 2:19pm
thank you graciously beautiful Willow for the love you show me daily and on this write...
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. rainbow revival
“my whiskey bottle of lies
was moonshine from straight from the devil's prick
you were a Baptist revival after my fall from grace “
You truly are the queen of metaphors 👑
The magic you create with a stroke of you pen would shame Merlin ...
~ Wicked
was moonshine from straight from the devil's prick
you were a Baptist revival after my fall from grace “
You truly are the queen of metaphors 👑
The magic you create with a stroke of you pen would shame Merlin ...
~ Wicked
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6th Jan 2019 4:40pm
thank you graciously dearest Wicked One you really do honor me greatly... I cherish your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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