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No Words
Lives hanging in the balance between here and the afterlife, life and death, only to realize their breath has already been taken.
God have mercy on this world, and the creatures that roam.
No more words
No more fly bird
No more silver lining
No more emotional binding
No more desire
Kill the flame dose the fire
No more laugher
No more wishing for the day after
No more love
No more hiding above
No more sense of presence
No more echoes from Heaven
No more no more
No more trying to even the score
No more light
No more, doing what’s right
No more carrying on
Drown the beautiful music of that love song
No more opening my door
No more bodies entwined to amour
No more doing my part
No more masterpiece works of art
No more expressive tones
No more answers from the ring tones of my cell phone
No more hope
No more sailing my boat
No more smiles
No more asking to stay a while
No more sunrise
No more wishing for a surprise
No more set me free
No more demands from mother’s nature’s creed
No more my mind will soar
No more knees hitting the floor
Yes, to the afterlife
God have mercy on this world, and the creatures that roam.
No more words
No more fly bird
No more silver lining
No more emotional binding
No more desire
Kill the flame dose the fire
No more laugher
No more wishing for the day after
No more love
No more hiding above
No more sense of presence
No more echoes from Heaven
No more no more
No more trying to even the score
No more light
No more, doing what’s right
No more carrying on
Drown the beautiful music of that love song
No more opening my door
No more bodies entwined to amour
No more doing my part
No more masterpiece works of art
No more expressive tones
No more answers from the ring tones of my cell phone
No more hope
No more sailing my boat
No more smiles
No more asking to stay a while
No more sunrise
No more wishing for a surprise
No more set me free
No more demands from mother’s nature’s creed
No more my mind will soar
No more knees hitting the floor
Yes, to the afterlife
Written by
SweetKittyCat5
Published 31st Dec 2018
| Edited 1st Jul 2019
Author's Note
Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.
Norman Cousins
Norman Cousins
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Re. No More Words
31st Dec 2018 2:48am
sad but beautiful for those that live no more upon this realm
have gone to a much better place no hurt no pain only bright warm place watching over their love one's
lovely write
have gone to a much better place no hurt no pain only bright warm place watching over their love one's
lovely write
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31st Dec 2018 2:52am
Thank you, I am going to have to put you in my scrub pocket and take you with me to work, for moments in the ER Trauma that are less than pleasant, you are truly a Hallmark card in the making, thank you for reading and commenting as well. Enjoy your upcoming week.
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31st Dec 2018 3:09am
not seen what you have seen in this way you wrote can understand the hurt you feel
by watching my mom parisher before my eyes remember the pain she was is watch eyes turn for a blue green to black not life in them
by watching my mom parisher before my eyes remember the pain she was is watch eyes turn for a blue green to black not life in them
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31st Dec 2018 3:34am
I am on the front line of that day in and day out and no matter how many times you have to witness its occurrence of life passing unto the throne of death, it does not make it any easier, never.
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31st Dec 2018 3:28am
Re. No More Words
31st Dec 2018 4:36am
Beautiful, but quite heartbreaking to read. Keep writing beautiful poetry!
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31st Dec 2018 5:20am
Aww, good morning and thank you so much for the nice comment as well. Enjoy your Monday as well
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2018 6:30am
Breathless!
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31st Dec 2018 11:27am
Good morning and thank you for the heartfelt comment. May you have a safe New Year and I wish nothing but the best for you and your poetess. Enjoy your day
Re. No More Words
31st Dec 2018 9:30am
A compassionate tribute to those who through violent endings are taken away from us in the ER/A and E environment. The date in the title may make one wonder if there was some disaster or multiple accident on that day in December.
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Good morning my handsome King, thank you for the touching comment. May your 2019 be filled with as much pleasure as you have shown me in 2018. As I bow in gratitude, I must say, may God always bless your forwarding steps in life, whereas, they will always lead to greener pastures.
Re. No More Words
31st Dec 2018 10:17am
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31st Dec 2018 11:19am
I am much appreciative for such a beautiful comment that defines what I do as within my profession, thank you and have a safe and prosperous 2019 New Year
Re. No Words
1st Jul 2019 4:54am
Glad you entered into the Chant My Pain competition cause I missed this first time around, a sad but beautifully written piece, where mine aare raw this has finesse and grace
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1st Jul 2019 9:29pm
Aww...my handsome moonbeam your words are always a soft caress to my heart, a touch to my Chi, and a deliverance to my emotional well being, thank you for reading and commenting, enjoy your evening as well
Re. No Words
1st Jul 2019 9:49pm
beautiful Sweet One
you have embraced deep truth here
you will no more be blind...
great write...
love Brenda 💕
you have embraced deep truth here
you will no more be blind...
great write...
love Brenda 💕
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1st Jul 2019 10:05pm
Aww... thank you my sweet poetess for taking the time to read and then offering such a prolific comment. Much love and poetic respect to you, do enjoy the remainder of your evening as well