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Grace
in the quiet time of knowing
I see my reflection in the oceans of wisdom
I lay witness to a woman evolving in grace
the tide rolls in and my rough edges are worn away
maturity sees me happy with the changes
the creator sees a jewel in the sands worthy of keeping
Published 26th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
26th Dec 2018 3:03pm
Like the pearl that evolves in the oyster, polished by the sand, you are a creature of beauty. Such a serene poem to start the day with. I love you, my beautiful Dark Angel...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
26th Dec 2018 3:04pm
thank you beautiful Willow for the love you show me always and the beautiful comment on this write...
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
26th Dec 2018 3:24pm
26th Dec 2018 3:32pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter I'm so happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
26th Dec 2018 3:36pm
27th Dec 2018 1:26pm
26th Dec 2018 4:01pm
27th Dec 2018 1:26pm
26th Dec 2018 4:08pm
27th Dec 2018 1:27pm
This is perfectly shaped and very beautiful to read and consider...
as the creator keeps the soul of all his jewels
love
jeff
as the creator keeps the soul of all his jewels
love
jeff
27th Dec 2018 1:27pm
27th Dec 2018 6:39pm
None of us can ever be worthy...yet through eternal love and grace ..we are brought into the fold...it was designed as such...
Christmas kiss
Jeff
Christmas kiss
Jeff
26th Dec 2018 7:54pm
Beautiful write, love the ocean theme and the tempering of time. Really lovely piece.
27th Dec 2018 1:28pm
Anonymous
26th Dec 2018 9:43pm
Very nice, Crimmy.
I really like that soft, introspective side of you.
You're a beautiful gem.
Love,
Matthew.
I really like that soft, introspective side of you.
You're a beautiful gem.
Love,
Matthew.
27th Dec 2018 1:29pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew for loving my softer side...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
27th Dec 2018 3:51pm
It's quite an easy thing to do, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
Love,
Matthew.
27th Dec 2018 3:58pm
27th Dec 2018 10:07pm
Love the gentle nature of this. You are that jewel in the sand, precious beyond compare. The Creator will be delighted.
27th Dec 2018 10:35pm
Oh as we change and evolve with time... This reads of acceptance and admiration of who you have become and the wisdom you have gained through the years..... There's a peace that rings through out....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
9th Feb 2019 2:05am
9th Feb 2019 2:30am
