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Lilith Recalls As They Celebrate The Anti-Birth
Dear Daddy was thoughtful and shrewd,
And though I don’t mean to sound lewd,
His methods were known to be crude,
When turning on one of his brood.
‘Twas Christmas Eve in two more days,
And what it’s to me didn’t phase.
His son-in-law, soon to be wed,
His daughter, who wishes him dead.
Dear Daddy expected to see
On Xmas Eve, we ‘happy’ three,
Exchanging the vows that he wrote;
To chew my words just like a goat.
My happiness had long been seal’d
To One who’s love never will yield.
The Love of my life I’d concealed,
Would soon show the power he’d wield!
Thy Angel, unfallen, is mine,
That knows in his heart we’re divine.
The time that I waited, confess,
My status as Queen means the best!
This night down the aisle before God,
Wearing virginal white what a fraud!
‘Twas Lucifer reading the rites,
To grin in the Glory he cites.
The moment we uttered “I will”,
The heavens let go such a shrill!
To witness the Unholy Ten,
When Hell hath no fury till then.
The Devil to keep track of Time,
Who’s Father’s as crazy as mine!
In Darkness, there’s no mystery;
We’ll party through Eternity!
Published 20th Dec 2018
| Edited 21st Dec 2018
Author's Note
For the Deep’s competition “ANTICHRISTMAS”, hosted by HadesRising.
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21st Dec 2018 6:11pm
20th Dec 2018 1:51pm
21st Dec 2018 6:15pm
Now that’s the kind of statement that frees up my face into such a smile...
Thank you, Thomas.
Thank you, Thomas.
20th Dec 2018 1:53pm
lol! Thank you, tommy, yes, the Reading was fun wasn’t it...
...just as long as you don’t mistake the photo image for Lilith!
...just as long as you don’t mistake the photo image for Lilith!
Anonymous
20th Dec 2018 5:16pm
Jadey,
That's fantastic! And I was on the edge of my seat, and terrified while reading it, while others saw it as light and fun(not saying either is wrong), but like we talked about. Cool, and the sign of great writing, and the beauty of poetry's many facets.
Awesome, my friend!
Love,
Matthew.
That's fantastic! And I was on the edge of my seat, and terrified while reading it, while others saw it as light and fun(not saying either is wrong), but like we talked about. Cool, and the sign of great writing, and the beauty of poetry's many facets.
Awesome, my friend!
Love,
Matthew.
21st Dec 2018 6:24pm
Well for sure I like knowing how readers of my work feel part of the action & emotion in a write, it gives me something to go on. Thanks for sharing, Matthew (remember what I said about that?).
Tiger
Tiger
20th Dec 2018 11:33pm
Interesting take on Christmas, Jadey. Love how you switch up the rhymes. A memorable write!
Why thank you, dear friend. It is indeed unusual. In fact, anything I compose specially for competitions hosted by Frank (HadesRising) is always bound to be unusual. But that’s a way I enjoy going outside the box.
20th Dec 2018 11:55pm
Not your rhyme but where you break it (twice) makes the poem very interesting.
21st Dec 2018 00:34am
Hmm, well that in itself is interesting. My thanks for your visit, and the RL honor.
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12th Mar 2019 1:18pm
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