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Taken
Dominion he had of her;
burrowing and galvanizing
her warm raw inhabitance
Filtered through each stifling gasp;
her redolent musky scent
Merciless became his thrusts
Through writhing waves and turbulent tides; she quaked
her pinnacle spilling down their thighs
Bucking against him;
to the tune of their saturated sex
Meeting him fuck for annihilating fuck
Further forward she bent; the depths of her core in offering
she cradled his being as his, he tucked and settled within hers;
their sacred haven now possessed
Her walls vigorously clasped;
demanding the abandonment of his seed
Her hunger then fulfilled
They lay conjoined; their euphoria still lingering
Alive and pulsing; the heartbeat of her sex
cuddling that of his
Mingling with her sweet spill;
now was it their pinnacle spilling down their thighs
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burrowing and galvanizing
her warm raw inhabitance
Filtered through each stifling gasp;
her redolent musky scent
Merciless became his thrusts
Through writhing waves and turbulent tides; she quaked
her pinnacle spilling down their thighs
Bucking against him;
to the tune of their saturated sex
Meeting him fuck for annihilating fuck
Further forward she bent; the depths of her core in offering
she cradled his being as his, he tucked and settled within hers;
their sacred haven now possessed
Her walls vigorously clasped;
demanding the abandonment of his seed
Her hunger then fulfilled
They lay conjoined; their euphoria still lingering
Alive and pulsing; the heartbeat of her sex
cuddling that of his
Mingling with her sweet spill;
now was it their pinnacle spilling down their thighs
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Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 15th Dec 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2019
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likes 13
reading list entries 3
comments 22
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Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 00:31am
That is one helluva steamy write. (Biting lip) I feel as if I've been schooled. ;)
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 4:41am
I'm gracious of your add and the wonderful praise from you as well. Thank you, dear Tenderloin !!
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15th Dec 2018 00:41am
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 4:43am
I like using out of the box terms, so a thesaurus I become.;) Thank you so very much for the add!!
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15th Dec 2018 12:07pm
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Re: Re. Taken
19th Jan 2019 1:11am
Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 2:11am
Passionate and very sexually uninhibited erotica...keep writing my dear you have some talent..
Well.done...🌹🐺
Well.done...🌹🐺
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 4:44am
Thank you, Greywolfman. I'm humbled by your words. Sensual and raw, I try my best!
Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 2:30am
This was such a sexy write dearest Pandora. Nothing like reading something hot and steamy on a cold winter night.
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 4:46am
I agree, Bonzi.. atleast you have your cozy, nostalgic socks too.;) Thank you so much for the comment love!
Re. Taken
Brava Pandora! You could probably guess my maximum tingle point, "Filtered through each stifling gasp;
her redolent musky scent" mmmmmm...mmm! The lines and curves of the pic are beautiful 😉
her redolent musky scent" mmmmmm...mmm! The lines and curves of the pic are beautiful 😉
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 5:11pm
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and it was tingle worthy!!! As always, thank you for such kind comments
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2018 6:29am
Oh my Pandora!
Nonetheless, that was very well written, and enticing.
Matthew.
Nonetheless, that was very well written, and enticing.
Matthew.

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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 5:13pm
I'm so glad you enjoyed it Matthew. Thank you for stopping by to tell me, I appreciate it!!
Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 7:42am
All I can say is that a cold shower was definetly needed after this one. Fantastic write and powerful image to go with it.
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 5:16pm
Mission accomplished then!! I appreciate the praise and add so very much. The pics always speak. Now, I need to catch up with your works;)
Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 8:35am
Like 'pinnacles'! An appropriate euphemism if one understands ejaculation as the height of the sexual enjoyment. Favourite verse (which might trigger reader's ejaculations!):
Bucking against him;
to the tune of their saturated sex
Meeting him fuck for annihilating fuck
Further forward she bent; the depths of her core in offering
she cradled his being as his, he tucked and settled within hers;
their sacred haven now possessed
Her walls vigorously clasped;
demanding the abandonment of his seed
Her hunger then fulfilled
Bucking against him;
to the tune of their saturated sex
Meeting him fuck for annihilating fuck
Further forward she bent; the depths of her core in offering
she cradled his being as his, he tucked and settled within hers;
their sacred haven now possessed
Her walls vigorously clasped;
demanding the abandonment of his seed
Her hunger then fulfilled
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 5:19pm
Thank you, Solomon_Song! I try to delve into my inner thesaurus, searching for something other than the same old played out words.
Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 5:28pm
really enjoyed this one...especially the after moments....and the picture says it all...stirring read...
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Dec 2018 5:37pm
Thank you Lawrence. That last short stanza built the whole piece. I already knew where I was going
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
16th Dec 2018 9:37pm
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Re: Re. Taken
19th Jan 2019 1:13am
Danny..I'm just now catching up on your comments. My dearest apologies to you. Thank you!!