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Dipped In You
I am dipped in you
In your fire in your storm
I am slowly consumed
By your hunger by your need
Melting in the fiery heat
We are bound by this connection
Emotional ties that heighten the passion
Committed to the lust felt
Our souls are bared
Inside the flame of desire
I am dipped in you
Like a tongue dipped in melted chocolate
Savouring the sweetness
The texture that surrounds it
Tasting a little piece of heaven
We are bound by the hunger we share
An instinctive need
Controlling us
Demanding we take our fill
Feeding on carnal pleasures
I am dipped in you
Sensually merged with no boundaries
Our beings in the melting pot
The perfect mixture
Of lust passion and love
In your fire in your storm
I am slowly consumed
By your hunger by your need
Melting in the fiery heat
We are bound by this connection
Emotional ties that heighten the passion
Committed to the lust felt
Our souls are bared
Inside the flame of desire
I am dipped in you
Like a tongue dipped in melted chocolate
Savouring the sweetness
The texture that surrounds it
Tasting a little piece of heaven
We are bound by the hunger we share
An instinctive need
Controlling us
Demanding we take our fill
Feeding on carnal pleasures
I am dipped in you
Sensually merged with no boundaries
Our beings in the melting pot
The perfect mixture
Of lust passion and love
Published 13th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2018 11:09am
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13th Dec 2018 11:31am
Omfg....
Colin,
My unbelievable best DU friend. I cannot begin to tell you how beautifully written this poem is, IMO or how it impacts me the way it does.... words are seemingly lost on me..... Damn, dumb words! ... Lmao... It's sweet perfection, this is. This poem deserves way more accolades than just my silly comments..It deserves awards and fanfare... I am glad Sky saw just how incredible this spill is. You have written a perfect love poem with just enough spice to make it heart stopping and utterly desirable... like I said... I'm lost for specific words... I am SO basking in the exquisite feeling of being desired like the way you write (maybe one day someone will) ..... Sigh ..... super duper swoon! ..... So Fucking powerfully gorgeous.
You are always my bar.
ALWAYS.
💜 you, my friend
xoxo
-S
Colin,
My unbelievable best DU friend. I cannot begin to tell you how beautifully written this poem is, IMO or how it impacts me the way it does.... words are seemingly lost on me..... Damn, dumb words! ... Lmao... It's sweet perfection, this is. This poem deserves way more accolades than just my silly comments..It deserves awards and fanfare... I am glad Sky saw just how incredible this spill is. You have written a perfect love poem with just enough spice to make it heart stopping and utterly desirable... like I said... I'm lost for specific words... I am SO basking in the exquisite feeling of being desired like the way you write (maybe one day someone will) ..... Sigh ..... super duper swoon! ..... So Fucking powerfully gorgeous.
You are always my bar.
ALWAYS.
💜 you, my friend
xoxo
-S
6th Aug 2023 9:37pm
6th Aug 2023 9:57pm
me gush?!.... NEVER!.
I'll admit, I was very impassioned... but I like that about me... hahaha.
I was only speaking truth.
-💙
I'll admit, I was very impassioned... but I like that about me... hahaha.
I was only speaking truth.
-💙
6th Aug 2023 10:00pm
30th Dec 2020 4:05am
30th Dec 2020 4:14am
16th May 2023 6:20am
Rereading this today, favourite lines:
We are bound by this connection
Emotional ties that heighten the passion
Committed to the lust felt
Sensually merged with no boundaries
Our beings in the melting pot
The perfect mixture
Of lust passion and love
We are bound by this connection
Emotional ties that heighten the passion
Committed to the lust felt
Sensually merged with no boundaries
Our beings in the melting pot
The perfect mixture
Of lust passion and love
17th May 2023 5:45am
