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GRATEFUL
1.
One point eight stones thrown
mighty proud of sheckels shucked
feet and knees applaud
2.
Far off paradise
by magic medium shared
wǒ ài nǐ bàba (我爱你爸爸)
3.
Happiness master
choose your misery or bliss
true smiles can’t be forced
4.
Model of kindness
so says her teacher and peers
daughter, light the world
5.
Civil thought prevail
banishing highly placed fools
sate my thirst for peace
Published 11th Dec 2018
Author's Note
These 5 Senryu/Haiku's are inspired by the "Self-Love Haiku" challenge. Essentially a restrospective set of poems reflecting on 2018. The first is an achievement, the second a happy moment, the third a lesson learned, the fourth a proud moment, and the fifth a wish for the future.
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12th Dec 2018 8:35pm
Your senryu/haikus are marvelous, Gahdess. You display a wide range of emotions and feelings. I particularly like the fifth:
Civil thought prevail
banishing highly placed fools
sate my thirst for peace
I take that as political with the "highly place fools." Hopefully your thirst for peace will be satisfied. Excellent work.
Civil thought prevail
banishing highly placed fools
sate my thirst for peace
I take that as political with the "highly place fools." Hopefully your thirst for peace will be satisfied. Excellent work.
12th Dec 2018 8:53pm
Yes Sir! You read #5 correctly. Here's hoping wisdom will reign in 2020. I am through being ashamed and embarrassed.
Thank you so much Sir Crow for your constant support.
Thank you so much Sir Crow for your constant support.
12th Dec 2018 8:39pm
12th Dec 2018 8:54pm
Thank you very much, Teri! I appreciate your encouraging words and constant friendship.
