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Silence Of Loneliness
The silence of loneliness
The cries nobody hears
The laugh that leads to tears
The smile that turns into a frown
The need to be loved when no one's around
The feelings of fear of being let down
When the silence of loneliness
Is the only sound
The cries nobody hears
The laugh that leads to tears
The smile that turns into a frown
The need to be loved when no one's around
The feelings of fear of being let down
When the silence of loneliness
Is the only sound
Published 9th Dec 2018
| Edited 16th Dec 2019
Author's Note
wrote in sad time in my life 2004
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9th Dec 2018 9:47pm
9th Dec 2018 9:59pm
9th Dec 2018 10:05pm
The fear of fear itself is sometimes a self-fulfilling prophecy. Can really hear the silence in this poem.
9th Dec 2018 10:10pm
9th Dec 2018 10:12pm
2004 was a pretty miserable time for you, wasn't it. Come to think of it, it was for me also. I walked.
9th Dec 2018 10:21pm
I guess it was :-(
I am glad you survived as well.
We all go through stuff and we learn and grow from those experiences even when we think its the end, we do heal and go on.
I am glad you survived as well.
We all go through stuff and we learn and grow from those experiences even when we think its the end, we do heal and go on.
9th Dec 2018 10:26pm
9th Dec 2018 10:35pm
I have a similar poem. Few people understand, but some do and really well. Hope you got out of the bad moment, if not I wish you all the best! Great poem!
9th Dec 2018 10:40pm
10th Dec 2018 1:53pm
Sometimes the walls just close in and there's no obvious escape.
Nonetheless a well written poem. Dx
Nonetheless a well written poem. Dx
6th Jan 2019 00:13am
