The Air Is Heavy

Love's adrenaline rush well explained.

Thank you for kind comment

Favourite lines, for conveying the sexual heat:

Souls catching fire
This is an electrical storm
Of two lovers deep in passion
It's a naked truth
Bodies laid bare to touch
Sparks between skin
That raise the temperature

Tkank you for kind comment

The build-up is an intoxicating feeling and you penned that beautifully here. Welcome to the Underground!   :-)

Thank you for kind comment, so far I’m enjoying my membership to deepunderground and encouraged to share more of my words that I’ve written over the yrs

Such an elegant truth and beauty to your words ... bless and love ... ..

Not sure I’m elegant in my writing I see mure elegance in this site I stumble around in the dark in that respect

it is a natural thing to be a harsher critic to ourselves in all things than others ... your writing is so beautifully expressed how can it be anything but ... Bless and love ..

I’m probably own worst enemy when it comes to self criticism sometimes feel inadequate compared to some of the posts in DU but I can only say mine are raw but certainly from inside a confused mind

I feel the same at times ... Not everything I write I like that much but I also use writing as therapy and publish a lot more than I usually would on a site like this ... I also come across a write like a few of those I commented on that just are pure symphony to me ... I also get a confused mind sometimes to illness and it can be so frustrating and often dont do things like write because of it ... it makes me feel unsure and those thoughts you expressed also come ... I know it will pass but lately Ive been trying to push through ... I know different but sometimes you get more interesting things ... so to me not a set things good bad ... just keep writing and let others worry on the how good ... cause you already are good at it

You hit the nail on the head there I worry to much over think it’s what my autism kinda makes me do it’s part of the process makes us so different

As artists we ALL have that in common whether we admit it to ourselves or others or not ... Besides to me its not really about better its about perspective ... how can one rate my perspective against anyone else's?  just write ... the rest usually takes care of itself ... Bless and love ... ..

there is something to
celebrate in the coming
together of lives

Amazing
Love this so much 💜

Beautiful

Blowing the dust off some oldies  I see :)

Glad you are AP this is yet another wonderful spill

Thanks for sharing

Some oldies are goodies. Thanks for appreciating

I walk down your memory lane, Colin...and it's brilliance sparkles (NO ARGUING!... Lol)
It's so great to read your older writes and the comments associated. You're so hard on yourself at times, that it amazes me you don't go back (you should!) and read these comments from years ago to remind yourself and to see, that your talent has always been. Thank you for sharing this with me and as always, I'm immersed..... in your exquisite words
💜
xoxo
B

I do go back a d read comments

Loved the passionate classic tone to this. Very profound.
Well done.

ive thought of what i scrobble as prpfound but ypur vomment brought a smile