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Oneness
I drank from an obliging daisy drops of sunshine
they fused with my soul
radiating from my inner being
the cosmic rays of understanding
my third eye open and I knew God
within a vision of telling all time stood still
I stood atop a mountain
and the face of creation witnessed my awakening
the trees all whispered my name
saying "child of the dawn record what you see and hear"
so I watched intently as eons unfolded
I saw myself born and reborn
reincarnated to live and die
making the same mistakes in each life
the moon spoke and said, "do you see?"
I sighed heavily and wept
the guardians of the great door of knowledge
said, "it's time you enter"
so on shaky feet, I came into the halls of wisdom
and drank deeply of the elixr of life
knowing it would heal me
instantly I felt the heartbeat of the place
I was one with the universe
my eyes eased open for the first time
and I knew my place within the vastness
I was the heartbeat that pumps blood through the trees
the wind that blows across the open planes
the mountain upon which I stood
I was God...
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Re: Re. Oneness
25th Nov 2018 1:28pm
thank you graciously beautiful Orenda I'm happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2018 1:27pm
The Universe does speak Bren. It just a case of aligning the mind to her language. The most difficult of all translations. Enjoyed this muchly. Rob
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25th Nov 2018 1:29pm
thank you dearest Rob for the love on this write...
you're deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 🌹
you're deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 🌹
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25th Nov 2018 1:57pm
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25th Nov 2018 2:00pm
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25th Nov 2018 1:58pm
The poem suggested to me it is time to re-write Timothy Leary ... 'turn on, tune in, and listen...". Josh :)))
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25th Nov 2018 2:01pm
thank you dearest Josh I'm listening to him right now...
I appreciate you turning me on to him...
love Brenda 💕
I appreciate you turning me on to him...
love Brenda 💕
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25th Nov 2018 3:07pm
Awesome enlightening piece👏👏 so many great lines
"so I watched intently as eons unfolded
I saw myself born and reborn
reincarnated to live and die
making the same mistakes in each life
the moon spoke and said, "do you see?"
Thats amazing I've experienced something like this before epic writing👏✌
"so I watched intently as eons unfolded
I saw myself born and reborn
reincarnated to live and die
making the same mistakes in each life
the moon spoke and said, "do you see?"
Thats amazing I've experienced something like this before epic writing👏✌
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25th Nov 2018 3:29pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter I was meditating this morning after reading you and this write came into being so I need to give you thanks for the inspiration...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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25th Nov 2018 3:43pm
Awesome! Meditation is phenomenal and glad I was able to inspire you to write such an amazing piece🙏 this write describes so many experiences I've had really enjoyed reading this👏👏
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2018 5:16pm
I felt this deeply Crim! Wonderfully written
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26th Nov 2018 1:12am
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25th Nov 2018 5:29pm
as are we all in varying degrees of self awareness...loved this 'trip'...I'm in the process of decalcifying my pineal gland and this poem really resonated with me...good stuff Brenda
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26th Nov 2018 1:13am
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence so happy you enjoyed this trip and it spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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25th Nov 2018 10:29pm
Spirituality and imagination here, Brenda. i'd say you're more of a Goddess than God in your stature. You're one of the deities of this site, and this exemplifies your power.
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25th Nov 2018 11:18pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for such a beautiful, heartfelt comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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26th Nov 2018 3:43am
You led me through your Dante decent and ascent...Setting my heart free from the beginning
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
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Anonymous
26th Nov 2018 5:28pm
Crimmy!
See, you write more beautifully than ever now! (and you were worried about your writing). That's beautiful!
I love that you're the 'heartbeat that pumps blood through the trees', and I love all your new, fantastic writing angles!
You're the best, my friend!
Love,
Matthew.
See, you write more beautifully than ever now! (and you were worried about your writing). That's beautiful!
I love that you're the 'heartbeat that pumps blood through the trees', and I love all your new, fantastic writing angles!
You're the best, my friend!
Love,
Matthew.
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26th Nov 2018 7:40pm
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29th Nov 2018 2:06am
To be a mountain is truly strength personified, and truly equal with God's magnitude, the vista must be breathtaking, the air cleansing, it's a wonderful imagining, nice read..
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29th Nov 2018 3:21am
Good lawd, how beautifully touching my ladyloves...
can't wait till I get more room on my list...
can't wait till I get more room on my list...
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