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Shadow's Shadows
Depending on the cloud cover,
the time of day, and which way I face
a shadow lies sometimes behind me,
often in front,
occasionally beneath my feet.
The story goes something like this:
I take a one-edged sword
- a prize I was given after many years shadow-dancing -
and dice the shadow like an onion into many slices
laying them out in my cave to see what new shapes I can make.
Hours later, my lover comes in with a single candle
and the shadow-pieces fall into a kind of trance
softly wrapping themselves around her body …
in a way she likes to be caressed.
When morning-light arrives
(we have no curtains, and two roof windows are open to the stars)
the shadow has returned to its regular configurations
offering a new start to this daily game.
I walk downstairs, pen in hand
and today,
this is the first result.
the time of day, and which way I face
a shadow lies sometimes behind me,
often in front,
occasionally beneath my feet.
The story goes something like this:
I take a one-edged sword
- a prize I was given after many years shadow-dancing -
and dice the shadow like an onion into many slices
laying them out in my cave to see what new shapes I can make.
Hours later, my lover comes in with a single candle
and the shadow-pieces fall into a kind of trance
softly wrapping themselves around her body …
in a way she likes to be caressed.
When morning-light arrives
(we have no curtains, and two roof windows are open to the stars)
the shadow has returned to its regular configurations
offering a new start to this daily game.
I walk downstairs, pen in hand
and today,
this is the first result.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 14th Nov 2018
| Edited 8th Mar 2024
Author's Note
(photo credit: peter-forster-bk2qXh1L7xc-unsplash)
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2018 4:57pm
I love the imagery you evoke in this poem...
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14th Nov 2018 5:49pm
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14th Nov 2018 5:14pm
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14th Nov 2018 6:03pm
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14th Nov 2018 6:30pm
ultra creative with images conjured and recreated.
Thoroughly enjoyed the read and imagination.
Thoroughly enjoyed the read and imagination.
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14th Nov 2018 9:38pm
Thank you Tallen, glad you enjoyed the write. Finishing running the 'anti-war poem' comp last Sunday has now left my mind free to wander onto other topics.
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14th Nov 2018 7:32pm
Fine write, Josh. This is indeed imaginative, and beautifully worded. These shadows have substance.
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14th Nov 2018 9:40pm
Thank you Crowfly, I like the way you see it when you say "[t]hese shadows have substance." (shadows generally get a bad press).
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2018 9:51pm
That's cool, Josh!
I liked that!!
Matthew.
I liked that!!
Matthew.
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14th Nov 2018 10:06pm
Hi Matthew, thank you for visiting and glad you liked it. And also I see you've started following me recently; thank you.
{PS: I didn't recognise you at first; I see you've had a make-over} :))
{PS: I didn't recognise you at first; I see you've had a make-over} :))
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2018 10:46pm
Thanks Josh, and no problem.
Yes, I did have a makeover. A couple of people didn't like my puppy picture, so I put up my drawing...now people don't like that! lol.
Oh, the life of a dork! lol.
Have a good one, my friend!
MZ.
Yes, I did have a makeover. A couple of people didn't like my puppy picture, so I put up my drawing...now people don't like that! lol.
Oh, the life of a dork! lol.
Have a good one, my friend!
MZ.
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Re. Shadow's Shadows
14th Nov 2018 11:10pm
This is delightful, Josh...lovely set of images,
and you did work yourself back to the beginning
sooo smoothly. thanks for the tasty ink, Amigo... much appreciation. Ely
and you did work yourself back to the beginning
sooo smoothly. thanks for the tasty ink, Amigo... much appreciation. Ely
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15th Nov 2018 4:47pm
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14th Nov 2018 11:46pm
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"where do shadows go in the dark ? "
That's a very interesting question. I've always wondered where the light goes when no-one's in the room to appreciate it. That's why I'm always going around switching lights off to save myself the angst. Others say it's to save electricity but I'm not so sure. I guess it's best to hand such questions over to the philosophers and theologians. :))
That's a very interesting question. I've always wondered where the light goes when no-one's in the room to appreciate it. That's why I'm always going around switching lights off to save myself the angst. Others say it's to save electricity but I'm not so sure. I guess it's best to hand such questions over to the philosophers and theologians. :))
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15th Nov 2018 5:03pm
This is excellent, Josh. I enjoy reading Jung's shadow theories so this really resonated.
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15th Nov 2018 5:15pm
Thank you. I've never read any Jung directly but "Dreams, Memories and Reflections" has been sitting unread on my shelf for years ... Now if only I can spend less time on DUP ... :))
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15th Nov 2018 5:21pm
Ha!
Jung's theories contrast the Freudian definition of shadow to include everything outside the light of consciousnes.
Jung believed everyone had a shadow side, and the less individuals were aware of it, the darker it became. Much akin to someone without a conscience.
Gotta shine light on those shadows to dissipate them.
Jung's theories contrast the Freudian definition of shadow to include everything outside the light of consciousnes.
Jung believed everyone had a shadow side, and the less individuals were aware of it, the darker it became. Much akin to someone without a conscience.
Gotta shine light on those shadows to dissipate them.
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15th Nov 2018 5:28pm
"Gotta shine light on those shadows to dissipate them."
True ...
"For when the light shines everywhere
there is no place for shadow's stare"
True ...
"For when the light shines everywhere
there is no place for shadow's stare"
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18th Nov 2018 3:08am
I like the painting a lot, it looks impressionist, I like the colors, cool concept to write about it..
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18th Nov 2018 4:47pm
Thank you - I haven't done any painting for some years now; poetry seems to have taken over but your comment stirs a dormant desire to pick up the brushes.
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19th Nov 2018 3:45am
I used to do art too, mostly drawing, I love art, but I've been leaning toward poetry lately too, one idea I had was do some sketches to go with some of the poems, but I love photography too so I've been taking pictures..
Pictures and art really add something to poems, it's great how we can be artists/poets at the same time..
Pictures and art really add something to poems, it's great how we can be artists/poets at the same time..
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10th Feb 2020 1:10pm