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this is me
I myself am made entirly of flaws, but I am stitched together with good intention. I am not cold or uncaring, but for hurt I'm always preparing. All of my scars cannot be seen, or wounds that have not been healed. Th past has taught me not to cry. But to myself I cannot lie, I look in the mirror then I see that this ting here, well this thing is me.
Published 7th Nov 2011
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7th Nov 2011 2:45am
but I know which is right or wrong
and what touches me most is your song
the truth and tells i see
are within me as well
keep writing
and what touches me most is your song
the truth and tells i see
are within me as well
keep writing
8th Nov 2011 00:54am
Thx I'm kinda new at this so I hope for as many critical coments as possible
7th Nov 2011 6:55am
I like how u say not all ur scars can be seen n ur wounds have not been healed. I feel u on that. Deep levels of hurt are always there but not always seen :)
12th Nov 2011 12:42pm
A well articulated tale of the vicissitudes of the human mind- At least your poetry's not
flawed!
flawed!
