papergirl

i've only been writing poetry for about a year now, i know my poems seem like a child wrote them, but it's like my therapy and i mean every word i write. i can't just sit down and write something, i can only write when i'm in an extreme emotional state. i know that affects my opinion of the poems, so i would appreciate any feedback i can get. i've never shown my poetry before. please be honest, criticism helps me learn and makes me better in the end.