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Nude
flush with feels
my eyes fold
but dare not blink
as you disrobe
every thought I've ever known
nude I have shown
my hand
soft touches engulfing senses
breaking down defenses
my kisses caress your nape
agape
titillating these tingles
warm and electric
pulses in intimate place
forward we face
words whisper desire
so sweet
higher and higher
euphoric reactions reach
as we plead to please
our need
to feed off another
licked fingers
and lips
the tastes linger
soft lines embraced
bare beauty traced
savory steam enfolds
then glides
ever deep inside
my eyes fold
but dare not blink
as you disrobe
every thought I've ever known
nude I have shown
my hand
soft touches engulfing senses
breaking down defenses
my kisses caress your nape
agape
titillating these tingles
warm and electric
pulses in intimate place
forward we face
words whisper desire
so sweet
higher and higher
euphoric reactions reach
as we plead to please
our need
to feed off another
licked fingers
and lips
the tastes linger
soft lines embraced
bare beauty traced
savory steam enfolds
then glides
ever deep inside
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Re. Nude
22nd Oct 2018 2:37am
Re. Nude
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2018 2:52am
Very nice, Tim! Almost needed an 'are you 18' disclaimer! Lol.
Hey, stop making me look bad!
Great writing my friend!
MZ.
Hey, stop making me look bad!
Great writing my friend!
MZ.
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Re. Nude
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2018 2:52am
Very nice, Tim! Almost needed an 'are you 18' disclaimer! Lol.
Hey, stop making me look bad!
Great writing my friend!
MZ.
Hey, stop making me look bad!
Great writing my friend!
MZ.
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Re. Nude
22nd Oct 2018 2:55am
Re. Nude
22nd Oct 2018 6:50am
Favourite lines:
higher and higher
euphoric reactions reach
as we plead to please
our need
to feed off another
higher and higher
euphoric reactions reach
as we plead to please
our need
to feed off another
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
22nd Oct 2018 8:30am
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Re: Re. Nude
22nd Oct 2018 11:05am
Thanks Tod. I am a fan of not being overly graphic and leaving that up to the imagination of the reader
Re. Nude
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2018 6:40pm
Sensual and beautiful, my friend. Someone has a worthy muse, methinks! :-)
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Re: Re. Nude
22nd Oct 2018 7:04pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
22nd Oct 2018 7:11pm
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Re: Re. Nude
22nd Oct 2018 7:14pm
Re. Nude
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 8:55am
Very sensual and beautifully worded
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Re: Re. Nude
23rd Oct 2018 4:13pm
Re. Nude
23rd Oct 2018 8:58pm
Erotic but also elegant. I agree with todski. This isn't too graphic, but leaves much to the imagination. The reader should use his (or her) mind's eye. Much more effective that way. Excellent work!
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Re: Re. Nude
23rd Oct 2018 9:02pm
Thanks Crowfly...I like when each reader can take away a little something that they need