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Living between breaths
just twinkling dusts on eyelids
forced open by persistent lights
peeping through the windows
remembrance of a smile
just sounds of the wind soughing
rustling dried falling leaves
jogging dormant memories
of then when promises mattered
sitting still looking far away
existing between light and night
forgotten scars gently tingling
remembering something almost forgotten.
forced open by persistent lights
peeping through the windows
remembrance of a smile
just sounds of the wind soughing
rustling dried falling leaves
jogging dormant memories
of then when promises mattered
sitting still looking far away
existing between light and night
forgotten scars gently tingling
remembering something almost forgotten.
Published 16th Oct 2018
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16th Oct 2018 1:22pm
Grace,
Missed reading your pieces, and now, i stumbled upon this one. Very subtle but somehow heart wrenching. I can definitely relate to this one, makes me remember some memories that i thought already forgotten.
Missed reading your pieces, and now, i stumbled upon this one. Very subtle but somehow heart wrenching. I can definitely relate to this one, makes me remember some memories that i thought already forgotten.
16th Oct 2018 8:17pm
16th Oct 2018 3:46pm
They say the split-second pause between out-breath and in-breath is a place where all can change and miracles can happen.
16th Oct 2018 8:18pm
25th Oct 2018 1:43am
The emotion counterpoints the imagery well. This is lovely in its melancholy Grace.
26th Oct 2018 9:04am
