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Sense and Sensibility- Five parts
S I G H T
What turns you on
The sight of a pubescent belle
The nimble nubile form hunched over the rail
The long legs in Library reading Byron
Or the tantalizing cleavage
The bathing slum Cinderella
The mahogany coloured calves
The visible haunches by the open sewage
What holds your sight
A drop of sweat trickling down her neck
An unsuspecting mother feeding her baby
Long silky tresses dancing in the breeze
or may be the willowy figurine
strolling down the lake
or the oblivious couple making love in the park
A thick stack of money under your bed
with unfulfilled promises of base desire
or inviting eyes indicating mischief from the dark
S M E L L
What turns you on
The strong smell of wet mud
or the fresh fragrance of afternoon rain
May be your lover's sweat post-coitus
could it be the overpowering old wine
or the freshly saved eucalyptus wood
The aroma of just washed long tresses
The smell of camphor and lost memories
from an old dress
The faint pheromone from the shredded gown
Wafting lavender or uplifting rose
May be the sinful dark chocolate
or the musk emanated by your lover at foreplay
The old classic by Shelly from college
The old dead rose inside with memories alive
A piping hot mug of mocha at six
or the crushed jasmines of the last one night stand
T O U C H
What turns you on
Your ex-flame's playful fingers
or that faint brush with a stranger in the train
or the touch of flaming lips in the rain
Groping-inexperienced hands in the loo
or slow, methodical thumbs out of the blue
an experienced masseur on a steamy night
The irresistible spell of touch and go
The light caress of the new gentle lover
or the full mouthed affair behind the car
The exploring search causing the explosions inside
May be the tight hug from someone unexpected
An old lover's familiar moves down your body
or the firm hand traveling up inside in a frenzy
That seething tongue rolling over the earlobe
or that heavy warm breath on your nape
T A S T E
What turns you on
Addictive chocolate melting on your tongue
or perfectly brewed coffee on a long evening
A large gulp of Burgundy wine on the beach
Juicy strawberries tantalizing your senses
A small butter cube disappearing in moments
or a perfectly blended Cuban cigar on a slow noon
May be Mediterranean grapes in between romances
A faint smelling meal of smoked salmon
or a gorgeous looking bowl of fresh lamb
Utterly inviting kebabs dipped in green chilly paste
or a regal looking dish of lobsters served with love
S O U N D
What turns you on
The faint murmur teasing your libido
The loud gasps filling up the air
or the quivering lips announcing climax
Well it could be the tremulous singing
or the sonorous voice over the phone
The low moan as fingers travel
The enticing greeting at the front door
or the pitter -patter of falling rain
The soft evening breeze thru the garden
The loud sound of the hard slap on flesh
or the heavy breathing following suit
The shrill chirping of birds early morning
The low whirring of the fan in the dingy hotel room
A mighty thunder storm
or the beeping cell phone
or the champagne fizzing out
The low hissing of the serpant
Published 3rd Nov 2011
| Edited 17th Feb 2012
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3rd Nov 2011 5:17pm
You prove it's possible to be erotic without being obscene, and this is extremely erotic. You paint a great multidimensional picture, for sure.
4th Nov 2011 6:34am
Beautiful_accident.:) Indeed it is possible. Glad you liked the effort and thanks for stopping by.
Much appreciated.
Write on.
Much appreciated.
Write on.
3rd Nov 2011 5:22pm
This poem delights all the senses with a beautifully erotic touch..peace Crim :)
4th Nov 2011 6:36am
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2011 8:02pm
in awe you are amazing with every word how long did this take you i wonder, it is superb!
4th Nov 2011 6:44am
Mememe.:)
Humbled. You are very kind.
Well this one here has a small story.
I had completed four parts-sight, sound, touch and smell-in one sit.It lasted for less than an hour(I was actually penning it down in my journal). And I had to stop by 'taste' as that point of time the four other senses were screaming for more.:)
So revisited a second time within a week and finished 'taste'.
Am happy indeed you liked it.
Will share more.
Write on.
S'
Humbled. You are very kind.
Well this one here has a small story.
I had completed four parts-sight, sound, touch and smell-in one sit.It lasted for less than an hour(I was actually penning it down in my journal). And I had to stop by 'taste' as that point of time the four other senses were screaming for more.:)
So revisited a second time within a week and finished 'taste'.
Am happy indeed you liked it.
Will share more.
Write on.
S'
Anonymous
4th Nov 2011 9:03pm
wow amazed thanks for sharing all that!
4th Nov 2011 00:24am
4th Nov 2011 00:24am
4th Nov 2011 6:47am
Oh thank you again Water Lilly.:)
Glad you enjoyed it. Will share more.
Write on.
S'
Glad you enjoyed it. Will share more.
Write on.
S'
17th Feb 2012 7:43am
Whitewand6
Wow..!
Beyond everything...
Senses..the dark secrets..unspoken.
But yet very strong to communicate.
:)
Wow..!
Beyond everything...
Senses..the dark secrets..unspoken.
But yet very strong to communicate.
:)
17th Feb 2012 10:43am
slumbeauty9
Thank you so much.
You have in a way made my day.
I had nearly forgotton most of these
poems. Now you have made me revisit.
Glad you like them.
Thank you for the support,
S'
Thank you so much.
You have in a way made my day.
I had nearly forgotton most of these
poems. Now you have made me revisit.
Glad you like them.
Thank you for the support,
S'
