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Every-when
A united man and woman thru sun and moonlights
Soul breaking free from an abyss into an upper sea
Half the solar wind blowing stars across a midnight
The puzzle showing all the pieces to been foreseen,
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A radiating life forming circle spins the world round
Intrinsic merit badge of honor for souls inner death
The vowel twisting turn to a measured heart bound
A mental crashing whisper besieged the last breath,
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Ancient laws of being singing the musical foresight
Winds in all directions spreading the needed seeds
Invite insight and bring a headlight to the hindsight
A joint of circumstance burning the mind of weeds...
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 11th Oct 2018
| Edited 15th Nov 2018
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Re. every-when
11th Oct 2018 12:01pm
Re: Re. every-when
11th Oct 2018 12:07pm
Re. every-when
She’ll get there . This is very intricate but clear if you know where to look.
Beautiful Jeff
Jackie xxx
Beautiful Jeff
Jackie xxx
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Re: Re. every-when
11th Oct 2018 4:49pm
Thank you, beautiful woman...I guess it is just the way my head puts lines together...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re. every-when
11th Oct 2018 3:25pm
Re: Re. every-when
11th Oct 2018 4:52pm
Yea...the "meta's" seem to happen in most of the poems...for some reason...another regularity, I suppose
Jeff
Jeff
Re. every-when
11th Oct 2018 6:13pm
Strange...I've just been reading a book about the solar wind.
Intriguing, philosophical write.
Dark Sun.
Intriguing, philosophical write.
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. every-when
11th Oct 2018 6:47pm
Thank you my friend and I just recently watched a piece on binary sun's...
Jeff
Jeff
Re. every-when
12th Oct 2018 2:49am
Another dream I guess but it seems very true in another way.when it falls on the philosophical side...
Love your spiritual words.
love
Jasmine
Love your spiritual words.
love
Jasmine
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Re: Re. every-when
12th Oct 2018 3:34am
Re. every-when
14th Oct 2018 10:12pm
Wonderful epic feel of this ... resonating with meaning ... such erudition ... bravo Jeff ...
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"such erudition"....never been referred to as such..thank you... I like this one... I think of your taste in writing when these come out...you seem to understand...
Love
Jeff
Love
Jeff
Re. every-when
16th Oct 2018 3:25am
Excellent entry, Jeff. Make certain you edit and hashtag #Rumi per the guidelines to qualify.
Best of luck in the comp.
Best of luck in the comp.
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16th Oct 2018 6:29am