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Star Garden
All the pretty pieces of me
All the shards
Left spinning slowly
in the lonely void
from a world blown apart
In this cold cosmic garden
where dead thoughts go
to rest
I find kindred stellar souls
Out here
in the asteroid parade
where all my
fellow dreaming aliens
go to grow
All the shards
Left spinning slowly
in the lonely void
from a world blown apart
In this cold cosmic garden
where dead thoughts go
to rest
I find kindred stellar souls
Out here
in the asteroid parade
where all my
fellow dreaming aliens
go to grow
Published 24th Sep 2018
Author's Note
Had this one sitting around, I don’t usually do shorter ones but this one felt right. Celebrating my return to DU after a little hiatus; I have officially finished the handwritten rough draft of my novel!!
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24th Sep 2018 9:55pm
Congratulations and welcome back!
Love the poem. Short, sweet and deep. Very nice.
Love the poem. Short, sweet and deep. Very nice.
24th Sep 2018 9:59pm
25th Sep 2018 6:28pm
Nothing wrong with shorter ones, in fact... this is amazing!
"Left spinning slowly
in the lonely void" > this just rolls of the tongue...
Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Cheers to your return!
"Left spinning slowly
in the lonely void" > this just rolls of the tongue...
Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Cheers to your return!
25th Sep 2018 6:53pm
Thanks, Duende, glad to be back...and appreciated, besides!
Ironic as I actually wrote this in appreciation of finding DU; all works out in the end 😁
Ironic as I actually wrote this in appreciation of finding DU; all works out in the end 😁
25th Sep 2018 10:03pm
25th Sep 2018 10:49pm
