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Adam’s Rib
Divine Man as he sits alone
A King without a Queen to sit on the throne
The gift to man, God’s spiritual song
Sleep Adam, you shall see
A woman to have to come unto thee
Rib now gone
Two kindred souls within paradise as they roamed
Such a beautiful earthly connection
Adam instilling his knowledge, his hopes, his desires into curvaceous of perfection
Ecstasy crowned, tree of life as one’s giving
Lovers in the garden, serpent slithering
Eve take a bite, your eyes will see the Dawn of light
Allow your mind to be your guiding flight
Your earthly insight
Forbidden Apple, Eve hungrily bit
Passed Adam’s lips, his teeth quickly dipped
Eve surrendering in the garden under the raw passion of a hard dick slip
Adam sapping sweeten juices from mouthing Eve’s butter rum slit
Without clothes, two lovers did flee
We hide in shame for now we see
Locked minds sinfully eloping
Pandora box of sins now their coping
Undeniable passion for the yearning of naked bodies has spoken
Adam’s throbbing manhood found in the deep abyss of Eve’s soft opening
Defiance, for unlocking the spiritual Master Key
Souls deposed, for defying the Almighty Thee
Fast forward today, among a word of silk and lace
Man cannot live without woman, his desired rib chase
A love story that started before the land of time
Without chocolates, sexy lingerie, roses, or sips of fine wine
Nakedness to Figs
A woman to a man, now his earthly gig
If we went back to do it again
Would life had been this bad, had those two not committed the original sin
Would unity stand strong
Would we all get alone
Violence, Hate, Racism, never heard of you
Ten Commandants would never have been written for life’s fools
Do unto others would have been the golden rule
Life lessons, would not have to be taught in schools
No God pities babies or fools would ever apply
We will all live like Gods, as time flies by
Earthly graves we shall have comfort in
If only those two lovers, would never have condemned our lives to wallow in eternal sins
A King without a Queen to sit on the throne
The gift to man, God’s spiritual song
Sleep Adam, you shall see
A woman to have to come unto thee
Rib now gone
Two kindred souls within paradise as they roamed
Such a beautiful earthly connection
Adam instilling his knowledge, his hopes, his desires into curvaceous of perfection
Ecstasy crowned, tree of life as one’s giving
Lovers in the garden, serpent slithering
Eve take a bite, your eyes will see the Dawn of light
Allow your mind to be your guiding flight
Your earthly insight
Forbidden Apple, Eve hungrily bit
Passed Adam’s lips, his teeth quickly dipped
Eve surrendering in the garden under the raw passion of a hard dick slip
Adam sapping sweeten juices from mouthing Eve’s butter rum slit
Without clothes, two lovers did flee
We hide in shame for now we see
Locked minds sinfully eloping
Pandora box of sins now their coping
Undeniable passion for the yearning of naked bodies has spoken
Adam’s throbbing manhood found in the deep abyss of Eve’s soft opening
Defiance, for unlocking the spiritual Master Key
Souls deposed, for defying the Almighty Thee
Fast forward today, among a word of silk and lace
Man cannot live without woman, his desired rib chase
A love story that started before the land of time
Without chocolates, sexy lingerie, roses, or sips of fine wine
Nakedness to Figs
A woman to a man, now his earthly gig
If we went back to do it again
Would life had been this bad, had those two not committed the original sin
Would unity stand strong
Would we all get alone
Violence, Hate, Racism, never heard of you
Ten Commandants would never have been written for life’s fools
Do unto others would have been the golden rule
Life lessons, would not have to be taught in schools
No God pities babies or fools would ever apply
We will all live like Gods, as time flies by
Earthly graves we shall have comfort in
If only those two lovers, would never have condemned our lives to wallow in eternal sins
Published 14th Sep 2018
Author's Note
From the time of Adam and Eve, man has tried to escape suffering in any form.
Mother Angelica
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14th Sep 2018 5:53pm
And that's why today hard dick and wet pussy will forever collide. Good ink I enjoyed this read.
15th Sep 2018 3:15am
A man after my own heart with such true philosophy. Have a great day love and a better weekend.
A poem as colourful as the picture - on my RL with pleasure. I love the Adam and Eve story, Biblically inspired as I am. I think Genesis 2 among both the most romantic and sexually inspiring passages in the Bible, and your poem reinforces how I find it.
It's a pet theory of mine that stripping to make love is the couple's way of creating a moment of Eden for themselves, when it was unashamed to be naked and Adam revelled in who God had given him. I don't blame woman for the fall (as so many traditional church fathers were quick to do) but the snake (whoever he represented)!
I am inspired by the words of 17th century Puritan divine Matthew Henry who wrote, in a commentary on the creation of Eve: "The woman was made from a rib from the side of Adam not out of his head to rule over him nor his feet to be trampled on by him; she was made from his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected and near his heart to be loved."
It's a pet theory of mine that stripping to make love is the couple's way of creating a moment of Eden for themselves, when it was unashamed to be naked and Adam revelled in who God had given him. I don't blame woman for the fall (as so many traditional church fathers were quick to do) but the snake (whoever he represented)!
I am inspired by the words of 17th century Puritan divine Matthew Henry who wrote, in a commentary on the creation of Eve: "The woman was made from a rib from the side of Adam not out of his head to rule over him nor his feet to be trampled on by him; she was made from his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected and near his heart to be loved."
15th Sep 2018 2:43am
I like the book of Genesis in regard to it laying the foundation of the beginning of God’s creation, Adam and Eve, in addition, I also like the story of Cain and Abel.
I do believe the serpent was to represent Lucifer who had already been cast out of Heaven by Archangel Michael and his army of Angels. It’s ironic because Lucifer, as the Superior Archangel was the Cherub of the Garden of Eden; as some believers of the Christianity faith have stated, Lucifer was the one who tempted Eve in the Garden of Eden. You have to love the beginning of time and the biblical story which surrounds the fascination.
Thanks for the insight handsome one, as always. Have a great evening as well.
I do believe the serpent was to represent Lucifer who had already been cast out of Heaven by Archangel Michael and his army of Angels. It’s ironic because Lucifer, as the Superior Archangel was the Cherub of the Garden of Eden; as some believers of the Christianity faith have stated, Lucifer was the one who tempted Eve in the Garden of Eden. You have to love the beginning of time and the biblical story which surrounds the fascination.
Thanks for the insight handsome one, as always. Have a great evening as well.
15th Sep 2018 1:46am
Would they have had the knowledge to have had sex and populate everything. Would there had been anybody else to not get along. Nice piece
15th Sep 2018 2:50am
That is a pondering thought, actually a very good thought. This is why I truly believe the fall within the garden of Eden had to be pre-ordained in some form or fashion. As you stated, this world would not be populated as we know it. Thanks for taking the time to read and then adding a thoughtful comment. Have a great evening love and a better weekend.
15th Nov 2018 6:37pm
Beautiful piece...insightful..thought provoking and emotionally touching my dear...all your writings touch me in many ways...😉💋
