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On A Sea Of Calm
On a sea of calm I long to be
you and a breeze to set me free
the water sparkling a soothing flow
the sun surrounding with a warming glow
your eyes shimmering in pools of peace
setting all my worries off to ease
my lips mouthing words of sensitivity
holding on to forever in this long lost captivity
on a sea of calm I long to be
you and a breeze to set me free
floating off into the great unknown
heartbeats drifting into all you've shown
you and a breeze to set me free
the water sparkling a soothing flow
the sun surrounding with a warming glow
your eyes shimmering in pools of peace
setting all my worries off to ease
my lips mouthing words of sensitivity
holding on to forever in this long lost captivity
on a sea of calm I long to be
you and a breeze to set me free
floating off into the great unknown
heartbeats drifting into all you've shown
Published 11th Sep 2018
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11th Sep 2018 4:47pm
11th Sep 2018 4:53pm
Thanks dearest Brenda. My mind is drifting in that direction this late morning.
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11th Sep 2018 5:16pm
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11th Sep 2018 5:23pm
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11th Sep 2018 7:39pm
I don't often feel calm, too much stimulus abounds
But this gave me a gentle feeling.
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But this gave me a gentle feeling.
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12th Sep 2018 2:23am
I'd love to go there it sounds beautiful, I love calm waters, it's a nice daydream..
12th Sep 2018 2:30am
12th Sep 2018 10:01am
Such a tender piece, beautiful rhythm.
"on a sea of calm I long to be
you and a breeze to set me free" > LOVE these lines.
"on a sea of calm I long to be
you and a breeze to set me free" > LOVE these lines.
12th Sep 2018 10:52am
