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Making Me Hole

Can't you see my disgrace!
Can't you see my disgrace!
Can't you see?
You wanna cum in my face

You wanna cream on your dream
Make me obscene
You say that you love me
I want to fucking scream!

Your words say so much
So much more than your touch
Like broken glass in my skin
Digging deeper within
Shredding my soul
You're making me HOLE

Don't you want to come inside?
Don't you want to come inside?
Don't you want?
You wanna tear me open wide

You wanna crawl into the womb
Enter my tomb
This sanctuary's closed due to catastrophic doom!

My tears cried in vain
All the time, all the pain
Like broken glass in my skin
Digging deeper within
Shredding my soul
You're making me HOLE

Written by Medinda

Published 23rd Aug 2018

#abuse #anger #SelfDiscovery #sex

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Re. Making Me Hole

carpemax

23rd Aug 2018 5:53am

Wow. I think you and I know both sides of the love coin. Sometimes it sucks, in fact, most of the time it sucks. But, if we're lucky to really feel true love at least once in our lives (which I did along time ago), it can still hurt but man, I consider myself pretty lucky. That's where I was coming from in my song. Keep up the poetry, you have feeling and write from the heart and those other dark places. -Max-

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Medinda

23rd Aug 2018 12:54pm

Thank you kindly, I actually have a much better outlook on things now, but this is a place where I've been and it shaped who I am. So, I figure its worth expressing.