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In Secret
Passion troubles me
While shadows of his words mislead me
Temptation grabs my little heart
And I bend in weakness
His hardness mingles with my softness
Parted lips whisper thankful sighs
Upon his throbbing temples
We stepped outside in secret
In love we blushed like virgins
He gazed upon me as if I was art
And asked if he could keep me
Standing before him
No longer just a thought
We'll sink in quiet shrills
Every sultry moment after
While shadows of his words mislead me
Temptation grabs my little heart
And I bend in weakness
His hardness mingles with my softness
Parted lips whisper thankful sighs
Upon his throbbing temples
We stepped outside in secret
In love we blushed like virgins
He gazed upon me as if I was art
And asked if he could keep me
Standing before him
No longer just a thought
We'll sink in quiet shrills
Every sultry moment after
Author's Note
#love #lover #sex
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Re. In Secret
17th Aug 2018 2:08pm
"His hardness mingles with my softness"...you paint a loving picture. Passion reigns supreme
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17th Aug 2018 2:19pm
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17th Aug 2018 3:22pm
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Anonymous
17th Aug 2018 5:42pm
Quite the write! Beauty hidden under the erotic tones.
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17th Aug 2018 5:45pm
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17th Aug 2018 9:59pm
Echo Ragnar and JusTim. Cue an al fresco night time session, if I understand second verse's first line right.
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21st Aug 2018 2:03pm
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18th Aug 2018 00:06am
Beautifully written, Tommie. Its a gentle form of erotica, and refreshing. Excellent work.
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21st Aug 2018 2:04pm
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21st Aug 2018 2:04pm
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21st Aug 2018 6:20pm
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2018 3:12am
Hey T.......beautiful sensual ink to a luver.......gracefully written.......felt magical.....enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Dec 2018 7:39pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
18th May 2019 2:46am
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