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invisible
i am invisible, can you see me?
i live in the air around your skin
in the breeze breathing in tune with the tree's
i live safely without being seen
you can hear me whispering on spring days
shouting in the winter
but never can you see me
i am Mr or Mr's Invisible
floating around sometimes silent
sometimes making noise
but you will never see me
in the breathing breeze
and the gusty tempered wind
i am present when you step outside
and you feel a cold chill
i hide in nature, invisible person or safe spirit
breathing through the breeze or wind
expelling warm or cold air
you feel me against your skin
and you hear me
through the rustling leaves of tree's
but you will never have a chance to see me
i will keep hiding as i always do
amongst the breeze, wind and air
this is just the way i am
always hiding but always here
i live in the air around your skin
in the breeze breathing in tune with the tree's
i live safely without being seen
you can hear me whispering on spring days
shouting in the winter
but never can you see me
i am Mr or Mr's Invisible
floating around sometimes silent
sometimes making noise
but you will never see me
in the breathing breeze
and the gusty tempered wind
i am present when you step outside
and you feel a cold chill
i hide in nature, invisible person or safe spirit
breathing through the breeze or wind
expelling warm or cold air
you feel me against your skin
and you hear me
through the rustling leaves of tree's
but you will never have a chance to see me
i will keep hiding as i always do
amongst the breeze, wind and air
this is just the way i am
always hiding but always here
Author's Note
i used the word '' invisible '' as an idea for this poem
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Re. invisible
16th Aug 2018 1:50pm
This reminds me a little of 'Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep' by Elizabeth Fry. You are talking as if you are a spirit but I feel in some ways you are the most normal person I know.
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Re: Re. invisible
16th Aug 2018 9:18pm
hello... this is not exactly about myself ... but in some ways it is .. i do very much like nature and can feel quite in tune with it at times. perhaps i was referring to my want / need to feel safe and maybe there are parts of me that wish to hide , lol.
it is about all those things which are invisible to the eye ..
so i guess you can read this in several ways ...
thanks very much for reading and taking the time to comment
it is about all those things which are invisible to the eye ..
so i guess you can read this in several ways ...
thanks very much for reading and taking the time to comment
Re. invisible
16th Aug 2018 4:18pm
Re. invisible
17th Aug 2018 10:14am
Dear Daffodil,
I love it. It's a masterpiece. You speak about the breeze, but you imply yourself in the poem.
I love it. It's a masterpiece. You speak about the breeze, but you imply yourself in the poem.
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Re. invisible
17th Aug 2018 1:52pm
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
18th Aug 2018 7:48pm
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Re: Re. invisible
23rd Aug 2018 9:18am
Re. invisible
19th Aug 2018 4:38pm
Great use of a writing prompt ... it swept me up along with you ... bravo my dear poetess ...
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Re. invisible
20th Aug 2018 7:13pm
i only comment on those on whose friends followers list i am
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i miss them totally
now u r decision poet miss
i like ur poetry
this one also
those who report and remove me
i miss them totally
now u r decision poet miss
i like ur poetry
this one also
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
21st Aug 2018 9:43pm
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Re: Re. invisible
25th Aug 2018 5:17pm