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Where did my #go
was it yesterday that I heard your voice
speaking of a thousand tomorrows
words so precious they made me breathless
you were picking diamonds off sparkling dewdrops
touching them just shattered the illusions
the dreams built by your sweet promises
there was a few hashtags for us them
#loveforever #secondchances #eternallyyours
but they are gone now and I couldn't find them
can you find them again
please?
speaking of a thousand tomorrows
words so precious they made me breathless
you were picking diamonds off sparkling dewdrops
touching them just shattered the illusions
the dreams built by your sweet promises
there was a few hashtags for us them
#loveforever #secondchances #eternallyyours
but they are gone now and I couldn't find them
can you find them again
please?
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 2nd Aug 2018
| Edited 3rd Aug 2018
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Re: Re. Where did my #go
2nd Aug 2018 12:37pm
Re. Where did my #go
2nd Aug 2018 2:45pm
Great hashtag, Grace! I really enjoyed your poem, and I wish you luck in the competition!
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Re: Re. Where did my #go
3rd Aug 2018 00:32am
Re. Where did my #go
2nd Aug 2018 5:45pm
Re: Re. Where did my #go
3rd Aug 2018 00:33am
Re. Where did my #go
2nd Aug 2018 6:10pm
Our hashtags are so limited. Sorry that yours have not been included, or have been removed. Great entry for the comp, Grace. Good luck!
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Re: Re. Where did my #go
3rd Aug 2018 00:34am
Re. Where did my #go
2nd Aug 2018 7:45pm
So now we have hashtags the subject of poetry. I wonder what Milton would say ? must call him some day.
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Re: Re. Where did my #go
3rd Aug 2018 00:36am
If you do get an answer... Do share:) Thank you Kexby for dropping by and reading.
Re. Where did my #go
*with a gentle hug...*
My dear sister, congratulations for the win on your lovely poem, which I now have a copy of safe on my Reading List.💌
Jade tiger🐾
My dear sister, congratulations for the win on your lovely poem, which I now have a copy of safe on my Reading List.💌
Jade tiger🐾
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Re: Re. Where did my #go
25th Aug 2018 2:04pm