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Waiting on September
sweat dripping
glistening orbs
kissed by the sun flesh
gazing desire
filling the space with passion
bulging need
pounding pulses
flames of fire
combined together
waiting on September
glistening orbs
kissed by the sun flesh
gazing desire
filling the space with passion
bulging need
pounding pulses
flames of fire
combined together
waiting on September
Published 24th Jul 2018
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24th Jul 2018 1:38am
24th Jul 2018 11:19am
24th Jul 2018 1:41am
24th Jul 2018 11:21am
It was so much hotter in my head. I'm a bit rusty. As always, thank you Poet.
Tommielynn, I have missed you very much. The mere mention of your name is a tingle maker but then you go and write this alkyring piece. Brava!
24th Jul 2018 11:23am
24th Jul 2018 4:23am
"bulging need
pounding pulses
flames of fire
combined together'
I really like this...excellent
Jeff
pounding pulses
flames of fire
combined together'
I really like this...excellent
Jeff
24th Jul 2018 11:24am
24th Jul 2018 6:54am
Hi. long time no see.
Last line makes one wonder if they are apart for some reason through August. (The title reminds me of the song "It might as well rain until September".)
Echo runaway mindtrain.
Last line makes one wonder if they are apart for some reason through August. (The title reminds me of the song "It might as well rain until September".)
Echo runaway mindtrain.
24th Jul 2018 11:26am
24th Jul 2018 9:17pm
Extremely well written, with sentence fragments a nice touch. Fine work, tommielynn!
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