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On Paper

He was good in a poem,
Not for any one person
Like rain,
On a hot day
A warm blanket,
On a chilly day

He looked good on paper,
Even with words crossed out
That's what made him real,
His imperfections
Not being able to hide,
Within the shadows
Written by tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)
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