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Loaded
Pass stronger ammo if you please
I'm aiming at her flanks
I'm dropping quickly to my knees
And breathe a word of thanks
The skin is struck by brand new rounds
Sweat left on her veneer
She feels the pounding, hears the sounds
But needn't have the fear
The bullets taking liquid form
That land between her thighs
My piece still loaded, that's the norm
No gun since we're allies.
I'm aiming at her flanks
I'm dropping quickly to my knees
And breathe a word of thanks
The skin is struck by brand new rounds
Sweat left on her veneer
She feels the pounding, hears the sounds
But needn't have the fear
The bullets taking liquid form
That land between her thighs
My piece still loaded, that's the norm
No gun since we're allies.
Published 21st Jul 2018
| Edited 22nd Jul 2018
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22nd Jul 2018 00:03am
22nd Jul 2018 1:05am
Wouldn't really try firing the gun in the pic. It would doubtless backfire. Still, ballistics is hardly the point, right? Thanks Shadow!
22nd Jul 2018 00:41am
it was a hold up then?
against the wall maybe?
you caught her with her pants down
with your sexy piece ;)
my imagination ran wild with me on this one...
love this Sir Crow...
love me
against the wall maybe?
you caught her with her pants down
with your sexy piece ;)
my imagination ran wild with me on this one...
love this Sir Crow...
love me
22nd Jul 2018 1:02am
I just hope it made some sense, and was fun to read. So glad you enjoyed this Raven!
22nd Jul 2018 1:17am
Oh...my! A weapon I wouldn’t mind pressed into my backside. Very sexy write Crow.
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22nd Jul 2018 2:49am
It's like James Bond in one weapon. Brings whole new meaning to "choose your weapon." Remember if barrel remains stiff for more than 4 hours, see a doctor or gunsmith I guess. Good one Sir Crow.
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22nd Jul 2018 8:28am
Could be James Bond in his womanising moments. (Gets the girls - but never the kids!)
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22nd Jul 2018 8:38pm
Can't resist a few puns and shameless wordplay now and then. Just so long as it isn't forced and trite, a trap I'm apt to fall into. Thanks for the comment, SweetOblivion.
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2018 5:17pm
Hey Crow......enjoyed this so very much.......mmmmmm bullets shooting sexy fun......your brilliant talent has no ending......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Jul 2018 8:40pm
Glad you enjoyed this flowergirl. I'm no longer one for guns but like to play with them here. Thank you!
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