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Three Letters
•One• ( Satan )
I write this to you, a cathartic exercise
In life, and what I hope to learn in its attempt.
I write this, though I don’t know why, perhaps you do.
I’ve never believed you were the beast people say,
That the church preaches, and the Bible teaches us.
But the way to explain what goes on in the Mind,
Where everything resides when we’re born, as we live
And then, always too soon, though some are blessed
- we die.
•Two• ( Dad )
I write this to you, a cathartic exercise
In life, and what I hope to learn in its attempt.
I write this, though I don’t know why, perhaps you do.
You know I recently lost you, and got Him back.
I was with you till the last, looked up, there He was.
And when I talk to you, it’s Him I feel hears me.
I’ve nothing to repay Him with, except my faith
Restored when I felt you returned into His keep.
•Three• ( Son )
I write this to you, a cathartic exercise
In life, and what I hope to learn in its attempt.
I write this, though I don’t know why, perhaps you do.
Hello, Joey, it’s been a while since I’ve felt you;
The phantom presence in my womb long-faded, gone.
It broke me when I sent the boxes to Goodwill.
Yet what I have of yours still remains in my heart,
I’ll take with me when Mommy’s loneliness says
It’s time.
Published 20th Jul 2018
| Edited 19th Jan 2020
Author's Note
For the DUP competition
“[Type] [Emotion] [Unsend]“.
(Letters written, but never sent)
“[Type] [Emotion] [Unsend]“.
(Letters written, but never sent)
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20th Jul 2018 4:54pm
beautiful Jade some very soulful letters
to you beloveds and satan...
I really felt these...
love Brenda
to you beloveds and satan...
I really felt these...
love Brenda
20th Jul 2018 5:12pm
Gracious thanks to you, dear Brenda, it’s so touching, your response—
ever
Jade
ever
Jade
Anonymous
20th Jul 2018 5:54pm
This is incredibly powerful & laced with nuclear explosion. Sadly, I can relate to all 3. Well penned.
23rd Jul 2018 1:54am
20th Jul 2018 10:49pm
Love how you introduce the catharsis in writing these. Also the faith in Part 2. I'd be lost without that, particularly with my own late Dad. Fine job, darling Jade.
23rd Jul 2018 1:57am
With humble thanks, my dearest crowfly friend. So grateful for your words of such support.
20th Jul 2018 11:49pm
Beautifully heart-written and tragic letters, Jade! Your words resonated with me and made me with to give you a hug.
Good luck in the competition!
Good luck in the competition!
24th Jul 2018 1:59am
My graditude & thanks to you, light of the illume, dear Luna. I still managed to sense a virtual hug...
🌜🐅
🌜🐅
24th Jul 2018 1:29am
I put this up for the poem of the month... because it's the best poem I have read in many months.
my heart...
geoff
my heart...
geoff
24th Jul 2018 2:06am
Thank you, most profoundly, my Tommy...
I had drifted off after my dinner, so I missed you, but...
then when I came back, this... this was here for me, in the palm of my hand.
Thank you for everything... and the honor.
Jadey
I had drifted off after my dinner, so I missed you, but...
then when I came back, this... this was here for me, in the palm of my hand.
Thank you for everything... and the honor.
Jadey
