deepundergroundpoetry.com
Sorrow
Is my heart so untrue,
Now how can I be so confused about my burning love for you,
I've found myself lost deep in this Forrest with tree so high I have no stars too follow.
I know your smile could light up any city, but I'm now so lost and I know you don't need me.
I feel im losing control and it fears me to know , that this lonely darkness will only bleed my soul.
But maybe I just dont deserve to have you, as far to many times have my actions hurt you.
I'm trying so hard to find me, the me that you deserve.
I'll tell no more lies and you my love will shed no more tears, I could be the one who protects you from all your fears.
And maybe we will never be, and I know that this is all on me.
But tomorrow is yet a other today, so too you my lost love,
Say LA ve, I must say......
Now how can I be so confused about my burning love for you,
I've found myself lost deep in this Forrest with tree so high I have no stars too follow.
I know your smile could light up any city, but I'm now so lost and I know you don't need me.
I feel im losing control and it fears me to know , that this lonely darkness will only bleed my soul.
But maybe I just dont deserve to have you, as far to many times have my actions hurt you.
I'm trying so hard to find me, the me that you deserve.
I'll tell no more lies and you my love will shed no more tears, I could be the one who protects you from all your fears.
And maybe we will never be, and I know that this is all on me.
But tomorrow is yet a other today, so too you my lost love,
Say LA ve, I must say......
Published 18th Jul 2018
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 5
reading list entries 2
comments 8
reads 695
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
18th Jul 2018 7:26am
Awww 😔😔 this poem was so sad and touching way to draw out my emotion😁. "I'll tell no more lies and you my love will shed no more tears, I could be the one who protects you from all your fears," is my favorite part in the poem because one dreams of finding someone who can do that. Overall great poem, keep it up and you kept on topic as well.
18th Jul 2018 8:00am
Thank you, I know what you mean its nice when someone plucks a string that u had forgotten was there
; )
; )
18th Jul 2018 8:34am
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
18th Jul 2018 10:01am
<< post removed >>
19th Jul 2018 00:16am
15th Aug 2018 8:08pm
I appreciate your entry in my competition, however, to me this doesn't fit the criteria. Yes, I've mentioned that a poem can be about reaching happiness after hardships, and while it's suggested that the narrator is letting go of the love, there's sadness within the words instead of acceptance. Even your title and themes suggest the complete opposite of what I'm asking for.
I like your poem, but it's not what I was asking for in my competition.
I like your poem, but it's not what I was asking for in my competition.
16th Aug 2018 2:45am
Dead set you are 100% right,
I'm not entirely sure where my head was when I submitted that. Cheers
I'm not entirely sure where my head was when I submitted that. Cheers
7th Oct 2020 10:36am
