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7th Jul 2018 1:47am
7th Jul 2018 1:48am
No worries mate, you got it! Dude I really like this.. I appreciate your style. This flows well but is not as bound to rhymes as I feel the stuff I write usually is. "blew into nintendo cartridges till we passed out"... yessss! Really though, this is on point. I like the little song bit in the middle too.. this is really good as far as the poetry as well as the performance. Your voice reminds me a bit of andre 3000 but deeper. I dig it, keep em coming!
7th Jul 2018 1:54am
Appreciate that, fam. Now, if only I could spit like 3 stacks lol... Thanks for listening
8th Jul 2018 1:59am
Took me back to my childhood, here in the Bx, MY. Saturday cartoons, breaking night to see them all, we had the best movies "Who's the Master!?" Our summertime antics became legends, especially when hide and seek became first kisses cuz we grew to add the "freak"iness. I love this!
8th Jul 2018 3:36am
Yeah! Memory lane! “Back in the days when I was young, I’m by a kid anymore but some days, I sit and wish I was a kid again”
16th Jul 2019 8:08am
