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Pennies
One afternoon, I was cleaning my kitchen. Sweeping up the dirt on the floor and things like that. I saw a penny on the ground and I proceeded to sweep it into the dustpan. All of a sudden, something about that penny hit me. I stopped what I was doing and immediately began to write.
Published 26th Jun 2018
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26th Jun 2018 6:18pm
My Brother Through Words :
You Laid It Down , Broke It Down , And Slammed It !
So Well Said , Felt And Broadcast , Representing Those Pennies !
You Are Penny Wise...those ignoring , Pound Foolish !
I want to hear more !
And the filming , the way you blended locations , while you rapped ?
Excellent...tell your videographer / editor !
You Laid It Down , Broke It Down , And Slammed It !
So Well Said , Felt And Broadcast , Representing Those Pennies !
You Are Penny Wise...those ignoring , Pound Foolish !
I want to hear more !
And the filming , the way you blended locations , while you rapped ?
Excellent...tell your videographer / editor !
26th Jun 2018 6:33pm
Glad to see you enjoyed it! We all have to do our part and pick up the pennies. I will be sure to tell him as well.
26th Jun 2018 9:34pm
Welcome to DU my friend!
You not only have a solid flow, but you delivered a deep message with this one. respect.
Feel free to check out the LoudSpeaker Poetry group if you are looking for more people who are working on performing their poetry. We regularly host competitions as well and would love to have you contribute on our next one if you are willing!
I look forward to seeing what else you share with us!
<3
You not only have a solid flow, but you delivered a deep message with this one. respect.
Feel free to check out the LoudSpeaker Poetry group if you are looking for more people who are working on performing their poetry. We regularly host competitions as well and would love to have you contribute on our next one if you are willing!
I look forward to seeing what else you share with us!
<3
26th Jun 2018 10:05pm
I will do that. Thanks for the feedback. I’m still fairly new here, so how do I find that group?
26th Jun 2018 10:17pm
group page in the top menu, if you are on a phone it may be hidden in a menu.. but once you are on the group page just look for the group called "Loud-Speaker Poetry"
27th Jun 2018 3:10am
Poetry is best served raw....This gorgeously gory indeed....I love your energy in this.
Peace!
Peace!
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17th Sep 2019 10:09pm
Wow your words are so powerful and deep. Your style is a lot like mine. I realy enjoyed this thank you for sharing. I'm new to this site so I would be honored if you could drop in and critique some of mine. Any feedback coming from you would be a blessing!
