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a cunt named pain
I don't like drama in fact I hate it
this is my home away from home
a place I reveal my heart
I'm not here for popularity
though I deeply appreciate the love given
you won't see my claws out
because if you did I would go for the throat
you feel me?
I'm hurting inside a misunderstanding
it shouldn't have occurred
but as good as I write
I struggle with having my voice heard
I didn't mean any hurt feelings
I'm not a confrontational bitch
cattiness and bitchiness doesn't define a woman
her beautiful nature does
jealousy abounds but it doesn't belong here
we're all writers doing what we love
each shining brightly with our poetic voices
some of us talk louder, I know I do
doesn't make me more important
just makes me different
an easier target
because you will always know my position
we shouldn't have enemies in this sacred place
i'm speaking from my soul
please see me
I will never see anyone as such
no matter what they do
because I know at the root of it all
is a cunt named pain
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 21st Jun 2018
Author's Note
I love you all..
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Re. a cunt named pain
21st Jun 2018 4:38pm
I am sorry to hear about the drama. You are right, this is a place where we can show our innermost and make ourselfs vulnurable. Drama can be very disturbing. Hope it fades quickly. I have experienced it before in other forums and it can really pollute one's experience.
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Re: Re. a cunt named pain
21st Jun 2018 4:55pm
thank you dearest Angel for your understanding heart with this.. I love this place I don't want bad feelings.. sorry you've experienced this type of pain as well..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. a cunt named pain
Anonymous
21st Jun 2018 5:03pm
This is a sacred place for us, beautiful Dark Angel. Don't let anyone else's drama invade your sacred space. We write. We express what eats us inside if we ignore it. Not one voice in the choir is more important than another. More than once your voice has lifted me when no other got through. I love you, gorgeous, so much
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. a cunt named pain
23rd Jun 2018 6:10pm
thank you beautiful Willow for your love and understanding.. we must always hold each other in high regard..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. a cunt named pain
21st Jun 2018 5:08pm
Putting it out there
Write & onto the next
Regardless of how anyone
See's or acts upon such
It's really all one has to do
It's all I do
I love you all too you wonderful
gifted people that you are 👄👄
Write & onto the next
Regardless of how anyone
See's or acts upon such
It's really all one has to do
It's all I do
I love you all too you wonderful
gifted people that you are 👄👄
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Re: Re. a cunt named pain
23rd Jun 2018 6:11pm
Re. a cunt named pain
21st Jun 2018 5:15pm
Drama, like gossip, needs company to survive.
If we all take the high road, the low road fades away.
Stay on the high road, sweet soul, for it leads to a far better destination.
If we all take the high road, the low road fades away.
Stay on the high road, sweet soul, for it leads to a far better destination.
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Re: Re. a cunt named pain
23rd Jun 2018 6:11pm
Re. a cunt named pain
21st Jun 2018 7:04pm
Most people are damaged in some way. It is painful to unmask the soul...great writing.
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23rd Jun 2018 6:12pm
Re. a cunt named pain
21st Jun 2018 7:40pm
'the people that we meet
both the sour and the sweet
touch us with their thinking'
Let me join the chorus of 'sweet touching'...
both the sour and the sweet
touch us with their thinking'
Let me join the chorus of 'sweet touching'...
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Re: Re. a cunt named pain
23rd Jun 2018 6:12pm
Re. a cunt named pain
Anonymous
21st Jun 2018 9:33pm
Dear Crimsin, I don't know what happened, but I know that this place is a temple and it should be a place where we can find freedom and peace. I am so sorry if anyone has done this to you or anyone else. Just know that I feel your pain and hope you and all of us can find peace. I love this sanctuary and I love all of you deeply. I feel like being in an extended family here. If someone is capable of such wrong doing, I'd rather leave and return to being alone in my own little world. If I can be of any support, please let me know. Hugs. J.
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Re: Re. a cunt named pain
23rd Jun 2018 6:13pm
no fear dearest Juvenalis all is well just a misunderstanding love prevails..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. a cunt named pain
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2018 7:09pm
I am grateful to the heavens to hear that. Love J.
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23rd Jun 2018 7:12pm
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23rd Jun 2018 6:14pm
Re. a cunt named pain
22nd Jun 2018 2:48pm
I fully agree with you. You are a great poet, regardless of the subjects, you write excellent poetry, clear and well written.
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23rd Jun 2018 6:14pm
Re. a cunt named pain
23rd Jun 2018 1:39am
You address the rivalries and bitchiness well, and make a proud stand. But I see no bitterness here. You observe the problems, report then express your love in the notes. Your work helps keep that "cunt named pain" at bay. Love you too, Lady Crim
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Re: Re. a cunt named pain
23rd Jun 2018 6:15pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for understanding and showing love on this write..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. a cunt named pain
23rd Jun 2018 2:45pm
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23rd Jun 2018 6:15pm
Re. a cunt named pain
1st Feb 2019 3:31pm
This was an emotional write. Just be yourself and don't worry about how other's see you. The internet is the worst because people hide behind their computers. They can hurt with their words. Words cannot be taken back.
Just enjoy yourself and block the ones that hurt you.
A very nice piece with lots of emotions....xo
Just enjoy yourself and block the ones that hurt you.
A very nice piece with lots of emotions....xo
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Re: Re. a cunt named pain
1st Feb 2019 3:34pm
thank you beautiful Mysteria for picking up on the deeper feelings expressed here yes this was a deeply emotional write...I will be myself I deeply appreciate the advice lovely lady...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. a cunt named pain
20th Mar 2021 10:28pm
good bye pain your remind me of hate williams survival of the fittest and white lightening.
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