deepundergroundpoetry.com

The Compliments of Older Men
I should efface myself and not be heard,
And blush to hear the compliments of men,
Who are much older than me: "Pretty thing"
And "dainty doe" - each tidy, little word
Will differentiate - defer to them -
I'm not sure why I should? They may well sing
My praises, but I'm sure they have conferred
To deck me with their follies as and when
The silks they buy conspire with the satin
To bring softness to shyness - it's preferred
To the embellishments of one who'd pen
Rebuttals of such gentlemen who fling
Themselves at me - I've shown I know the place
For you to fuck, and, then, efface with grace.
And blush to hear the compliments of men,
Who are much older than me: "Pretty thing"
And "dainty doe" - each tidy, little word
Will differentiate - defer to them -
I'm not sure why I should? They may well sing
My praises, but I'm sure they have conferred
To deck me with their follies as and when
The silks they buy conspire with the satin
To bring softness to shyness - it's preferred
To the embellishments of one who'd pen
Rebuttals of such gentlemen who fling
Themselves at me - I've shown I know the place
For you to fuck, and, then, efface with grace.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 0
comments 21
reads 793
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. The Compliments of Older Men
19th Jun 2018 10:40am
beautiful Sweet One
you are wise beyond your years..
these older men can't charm you..
you know better..
for me it's younger men trying to do the same
except they try to trade on their looks instead of gifts..
me too..
i'm too smart..
I know better..
awesome write..
love Crim
you are wise beyond your years..
these older men can't charm you..
you know better..
for me it's younger men trying to do the same
except they try to trade on their looks instead of gifts..
me too..
i'm too smart..
I know better..
awesome write..
love Crim
1

Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 6:46am
Re. The Compliments of Older Men
19th Jun 2018 10:47am
They see more than the surface. Well, most of them. Just smile and say thank you
0

Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 6:45am
Re. The Compliments of Older Men
19th Jun 2018 2:14pm
Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 6:48am
Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 12:50pm
I'm an older guy and I get the attitude but don't subscribe to it.
A lot of older men are creeps ....
A lot of older men are creeps ....
1

Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 2:16pm
I know they are, sir; and you are right as a rule; but there are a few gems to be found.
Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 3:41pm
I hope I am one ....
I try to be cognizant of my responsibility to human kind ....
I try to be cognizant of my responsibility to human kind ....
1

Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 4:11pm
Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
21st Jun 2018 12:33pm
Re. The Compliments of Older Men
19th Jun 2018 3:57pm
Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 6:50am
Re. The Compliments of Older Men
19th Jun 2018 10:49pm
Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 6:42am
Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 1:35pm
At any age, we all want to be loved.
I guess how its delivered and received in interpretation are the key differences.
You certainly have touched on a subject that's food for thought.
I guess how its delivered and received in interpretation are the key differences.
You certainly have touched on a subject that's food for thought.
0

Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
I think maybe one shouldn't generalise - and I know I sometimes do myself. People can be kind or cruel whatever their age.
Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 2:26pm
True, kindness and cruelty do not have a number.
I wasn't generalizing anything, it was merely looking at the subject from a different scope.
I wasn't generalizing anything, it was merely looking at the subject from a different scope.
1

Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 4:13pm
Reply - when I said "you" I meant people in general - nothing personal intended - and yes, you're right, varying the perspective is always valuable - smiles - thank you for the thoughtful commentary
Re. The Compliments of Older Men
Anonymous
20th Jun 2018 2:48pm
Nicely balanced, there's a hint of your reply to crimsin within the objections. Nicely written

1

Re: Re. The Compliments of Older Men
20th Jun 2018 4:16pm
mmmm- hmmm - being in two minds and open to alternative views is sometimes less lonely than being single minded about things. I do try to listen and to learn.