What she is..

she is a Gustav Klimt

unclothed by the( ravages) of time=====pestilence  refers  to the bubonic plague, black death, in London;

she roam the earth(.) a full stop, roam is a verb



(as she) exposed her scares ===leave out as she--- exposing her scares

(the very relics remind of her dark past)=== leave this out

exposing her scares, with in her heart, these flames unleashed from the abyss of hell.

i shell stop there because i'm beginning to  wright your poem

the idea of a poem is flow

you jump from one line to another

i felt the first few lines jumped from one line to another

the second half has a flow

Oh thank you..  I copied your comment for my reference. Actually I am a newbie and through constant reading and practice writing I am able to make few. I wanted to learn this. I just don't know it I am doing it correctly. Thank for the insight... ☺

Beautiful verses. So much pain. "she adhered to positivity over negativity". Very good come back. But humanity can't always do so. I know I can't. But that's me. Great poem. Lovely indeed.

Thanks for appreciating. At the end of the day, I would always want to close my eyes with a positive view of what and how my day went. Even my life isn't perfect but at least I want to try to make it better starting with my own thoughts. Blessings to you for sharing your view. I am honored. Happy weekend.

I truly meant it as a compliment. It is indeed very lovely. If poetry allows us to meditate, it's true and sincere. Anything that can hit the heart, mind and soul is truly great poetry. The honour is mine. Blessings to you. J.

Indeed. I agree 👍 have a great weekend j.

Love this

Thank you kindly