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The Estate
High crime area
But those dismal concrete toads
Have the ring of home
But those dismal concrete toads
Have the ring of home
Published 15th May 2018
Author's Note
I grew up on a council estate where everyone and their mum has a giant pitbull type dog for security purposes and the police were round like the taxman. When I was little I always thought that these little fat tower blocks looked like toads, afloat in a sea of trash.
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15th May 2018 2:31am
Nice intro floralii. Thanks for explaining the poem, cos I didn't have a clue. :-)
15th May 2018 6:09am
Hello
Welcome to the underground
Thank you for the read.
Very imaginative in such few words...
Love it a lot!
Al
Welcome to the underground
Thank you for the read.
Very imaginative in such few words...
Love it a lot!
Al
15th May 2018 7:48am
15th May 2018 9:11am
I thought for a moment you were making a play
on words , aka , "Toad In The Hole" ( pork chops
in batter ) , or "Toad In The Hole" , as in petrified
toads , allegedly found inside geodes , or rock strata ;
I mean , you are from Britain , so I was not sure ,
as my first experience with "Toad In The Hole" was
the first example , when my London born fiance took
me to her parents house for dinner...lol !
And for dessert , "spotted dick" , or currant pudding in a roll...
Being rather altered ( 1970's ) i lost it when they told me what
we would be eating !
Very good , Floralii !
on words , aka , "Toad In The Hole" ( pork chops
in batter ) , or "Toad In The Hole" , as in petrified
toads , allegedly found inside geodes , or rock strata ;
I mean , you are from Britain , so I was not sure ,
as my first experience with "Toad In The Hole" was
the first example , when my London born fiance took
me to her parents house for dinner...lol !
And for dessert , "spotted dick" , or currant pudding in a roll...
Being rather altered ( 1970's ) i lost it when they told me what
we would be eating !
Very good , Floralii !
Anonymous
16th May 2018 6:21pm
I enjoyed this raw piece, the type, kind of writing I like the most
because it seems to be written without fear,
and fear of what?you would ask...
expression! self-expression
Thank for sharing
because it seems to be written without fear,
and fear of what?you would ask...
expression! self-expression
Thank for sharing
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
26th May 2018 5:47pm
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