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Equation
Two hearts in one beat
make up a perfect square.
By adding one,
things get too complex to be real.
make up a perfect square.
By adding one,
things get too complex to be real.
Published 9th Apr 2018
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11th Apr 2018 2:29am
15th Aug 2018 10:31pm
I agree with SweetOblivion. Your clever poem really gets the message across.
19th Aug 2018 8:47pm
23rd Aug 2018 10:17pm
...I applaud your brevity, apple, ... succinctly said...
and I tend to agree...
adding one more to the mix would irrevocably change the equation...
never something to undertake lightly...
and I tend to agree...
adding one more to the mix would irrevocably change the equation...
never something to undertake lightly...
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
10th Jun 2019 1:14pm
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17th Jun 2019 10:29pm
By adding one, maybe it goes 3-dimensional instead of two-dimensional - but two is probably safer.
