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Equation
Two hearts in one beat
make up a perfect square.
By adding one,
things get too complex to be real.
Written by
applepie77
Published
9th Apr 2018
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SweetOblivion
11th Apr 2018 2:29am
I like this - pure and precise - stripped of all veneer
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LunasChild8
15th Aug 2018 10:31pm
I agree with SweetOblivion. Your clever poem really gets the message across.
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Angelast1
19th Aug 2018 8:47pm
Like this one....says what needs to be said with minimal efford.
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Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
23rd Aug 2018 10:17pm
...I applaud your brevity, apple, ... succinctly said...
and I tend to agree...
adding one more to the mix would irrevocably change the equation...
never something to undertake lightly...
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
10th Jun 2019 1:14pm
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Josh
(Joshua Bond)
17th Jun 2019 10:29pm
By adding one, maybe it goes 3-dimensional instead of two-dimensional - but two is probably safer.
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