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Taj Mahal
Like a butterfly
fragile and beautiful
touching my soul
you asked me to dream together
So we began to dream
of things to come
giving birth to
a bright future.
Now
you've left me behind
with no place to mourn
and
tempted by the night.
But
we've kept our promise -
forever.
fragile and beautiful
touching my soul
you asked me to dream together
So we began to dream
of things to come
giving birth to
a bright future.
Now
you've left me behind
with no place to mourn
and
tempted by the night.
But
we've kept our promise -
forever.
Published 20th Sep 2017
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20th Sep 2017 7:08pm
Tihis poem is so much more than a mere poem. It's a declaration of love as well as a declaration of grief. Soulmelting and heart-wrenching. I think of you and give you a tight hug. Always your friend. XXX
I wrote a poem (my first ever) for my sister who had just lost her husband of many years.
I think it amply applies here as well and hope it offers you some comfort.
"A Glass Well Measured" 18/7/17
A heartfelt hug goes out to you.
I think it amply applies here as well and hope it offers you some comfort.
"A Glass Well Measured" 18/7/17
A heartfelt hug goes out to you.
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2017 5:42am
Breaths have given and taken away. God awful beautiful Sir,
Anonymous
13th Dec 2017 9:14pm
You’ve captured this heartbreak and grief in a really beautiful way. Hugs <3
1st Jan 2018 2:51am
