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FEEL ME
She asks "Can you feel me...?"
"As if you were here with me"
I, with exultation, reply
Electricity courses through my body
as my fingers dance
with the silky tendrils, live-wires
on the nape of your neck
Seduced by your magnetic,
needing, wanting,
unconditionally accepting gaze
eliciting a smile, a joyful tear
Your breath
warm on my face
familiar,comforting scent
presages the vibration
of your voice
magnificent sultriness
Your succulent lips
fuse with mine
as if never to be separated
our tongues colliding
intertwining
Mesmerized
by the candlelight
reflected off the smooth round
of your glorious shoulders
where my lips linger
pressed against
their polished ebony surface
Like a voracious beast
I attack your breasts
hiding my hands
beneath their sweat moistened
underside
lifting them to suckle
each rock-hard ruby nipple
Grabbing you
in a kissing embrace
my hands travel the length
of your back
coming to rest on your curvaceous hips
moving down your crevice
to cradle your round, breathtaking bottom
waves of euphoria roll over me
as I feel your heat
I crumple to my knees
spreading your thighs
my fingers unwrap
your humid,
heavenly musk-scented
chocolate box
the hard tip of my tongue
probes and discovers
your fuchsia hood
and hungrily licks
your priceless pearl
Penetrating your humidity
with my blushing rigidity
your welcoming tightening
invites me to stay
play a while
until with shuddering ecstasy
my cream explodes forth
to mix with your sweet honey
Oh yes, I can feel you
"As if you were here with me"
I, with exultation, reply
Electricity courses through my body
as my fingers dance
with the silky tendrils, live-wires
on the nape of your neck
Seduced by your magnetic,
needing, wanting,
unconditionally accepting gaze
eliciting a smile, a joyful tear
Your breath
warm on my face
familiar,comforting scent
presages the vibration
of your voice
magnificent sultriness
Your succulent lips
fuse with mine
as if never to be separated
our tongues colliding
intertwining
Mesmerized
by the candlelight
reflected off the smooth round
of your glorious shoulders
where my lips linger
pressed against
their polished ebony surface
Like a voracious beast
I attack your breasts
hiding my hands
beneath their sweat moistened
underside
lifting them to suckle
each rock-hard ruby nipple
Grabbing you
in a kissing embrace
my hands travel the length
of your back
coming to rest on your curvaceous hips
moving down your crevice
to cradle your round, breathtaking bottom
waves of euphoria roll over me
as I feel your heat
I crumple to my knees
spreading your thighs
my fingers unwrap
your humid,
heavenly musk-scented
chocolate box
the hard tip of my tongue
probes and discovers
your fuchsia hood
and hungrily licks
your priceless pearl
Penetrating your humidity
with my blushing rigidity
your welcoming tightening
invites me to stay
play a while
until with shuddering ecstasy
my cream explodes forth
to mix with your sweet honey
Oh yes, I can feel you
Published 4th Apr 2018
| Edited 21st Jul 2019
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4th Apr 2018 10:00pm
Great poem ... really like ... "Seduced by your magnetic,/needing, wanting,/unconditionally accepting gaze/eliciting a smile, a joyful tear" ... "your humid/heavily musk-scented chocolate box" ... "my cream explodes forth/to mix with your sweet honey" ... then, "O yes, I can feel you" ... *sigh*
4th Apr 2018 10:13pm
Thank you so much Soledad! You write about intimacy so well I am honored you like this piece. I sure had fun with its creation.
4th Apr 2018 10:17pm
"musk-scented chocolate box" is ... simply fantastic. Had to say it again
4th Apr 2018 11:57pm
4th Apr 2018 10:42pm
5th Apr 2018 00:03am
Wow! To elicit such a visceral reaction is exciting. I am glad it affected you so deeply. :)
Anonymous
4th Apr 2018 11:43pm
Excellent. Passion at its best. Loved it
5th Apr 2018 00:01am
5th Apr 2018 8:32am
Litterally the first poem I read after signing on for the first time in months! Hot, sexy and one hell of a read. Very nice GadhessWorship!
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5th Apr 2018 6:09pm
I am honored to be the first. I missed your poetry. I'm glad this piece touched you in some way and maybe brought some tingles.
7th Apr 2018 2:04am
You use words with such precision that the thrill is all the greater.
Your succulent lips
fuse with mine
as if never to be separated
our tongues colliding
intertwining
More fine erotica from one of the best in this DUP field! Steamy from start to finish...
Your succulent lips
fuse with mine
as if never to be separated
our tongues colliding
intertwining
More fine erotica from one of the best in this DUP field! Steamy from start to finish...
7th Apr 2018 3:18am
I am truly humbled by your comment. I am glad you like my combination of words. Cheers!
