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And they asked me to write a poem
...and they asked me
to write a poem
i said who the hell
writes poems
these days
all you see
are expressions
my poems
and poetry
died
when she said
"it's time"
the music
just stopped
my quill
just dropped
time for expression
is now
and that's the reason
that what you see now
is nothing but
frustration
exclamation
and screams
no nothing there
to be broken
left
not even the dreams
and you want me to write poetry?
©2018 cold_fusion. All rights reserved.
to write a poem
i said who the hell
writes poems
these days
all you see
are expressions
my poems
and poetry
died
when she said
"it's time"
the music
just stopped
my quill
just dropped
time for expression
is now
and that's the reason
that what you see now
is nothing but
frustration
exclamation
and screams
no nothing there
to be broken
left
not even the dreams
and you want me to write poetry?
©2018 cold_fusion. All rights reserved.
Published 17th Feb 2018
| Edited 21st Feb 2018
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Well the excerpts, like a trailer, makes one
wish to watch the movie.
Wondering what the rating will be.
Sometimes the coming home,
settling in, and immersion,
a more fitting end than any
sequel could ever match.
If I may be so bold.
wish to watch the movie.
Wondering what the rating will be.
Sometimes the coming home,
settling in, and immersion,
a more fitting end than any
sequel could ever match.
If I may be so bold.
goodness gracious me!! Teri!
rating? well, only time will tell( and as a spoiler, it has already told me- won't be none)
;-)
some works i believe are destined to be left incomplete
yet at the same time i do believe life is not a sad story
so there's always hope
of completion and there are exceptions of that as well!
so far i've been lucky, but who knows, what's just around the corner dear Friend!?
yes, agree with you fully
re the coming home and settling in!
well, bold indeed is beautiful!!
welcome is the peer!
welcome
is the review awesome!
appreciate all
immensely!
rating? well, only time will tell( and as a spoiler, it has already told me- won't be none)
;-)
some works i believe are destined to be left incomplete
yet at the same time i do believe life is not a sad story
so there's always hope
of completion and there are exceptions of that as well!
so far i've been lucky, but who knows, what's just around the corner dear Friend!?
yes, agree with you fully
re the coming home and settling in!
well, bold indeed is beautiful!!
welcome is the peer!
welcome
is the review awesome!
appreciate all
immensely!
18th Feb 2018 9:31pm
A real thoughtful piece of ink CF...and the time for expression is indeed now!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
19th Feb 2018 1:10pm
awwe!! Harry!
never fail to humble me as well as honor my ink.
yes, the time for expression is now!! never been more apt!
welcome is your presence
welcome is your review dear Poet!
appreciate all
immensely!
never fail to humble me as well as honor my ink.
yes, the time for expression is now!! never been more apt!
welcome is your presence
welcome is your review dear Poet!
appreciate all
immensely!
19th Feb 2018 1:39pm
#spoileralert
it was poetry at it's best.
i love your voice, the distance between subject & speaker is something i absolutely envy.
a freaking amazing write, cold one.
gonna have to clear out the list to keep it.
it was poetry at it's best.
i love your voice, the distance between subject & speaker is something i absolutely envy.
a freaking amazing write, cold one.
gonna have to clear out the list to keep it.
19th Feb 2018 1:48pm
My Gosh!
what an honor!!
utterly utterly humbling!
welcome is the Admired Poet!
Welcome is the Review Gracious!
Appreciation, beyond words!
Dear Friend!!
:-)
what an honor!!
utterly utterly humbling!
welcome is the Admired Poet!
Welcome is the Review Gracious!
Appreciation, beyond words!
Dear Friend!!
:-)
20th Feb 2018 2:40am
Create something real and it cannot be contained in labels. I dig the spirit I find in this write.
21st Feb 2018 2:28pm
Welcome
dear respected Poet!
attest to that, fully.
appreciate immensely
your visit
and the insight deep!
dear respected Poet!
attest to that, fully.
appreciate immensely
your visit
and the insight deep!
