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dry?
looks like
the hot wind
that blew
all day yesterday
left me dry
on the inside too
and the desert
hasn't
even
begun
i say
let's do this
bring
on
the Sahara!
©2018 cold_fusion. All rights reserved.
Published 19th Feb 2018
| Edited 21st Feb 2018
Author's Note
A mind over matter matter. When you got nothing to lose, you go let's do this and take on whatever comes your way! Wisdom is for the survivors and this in no way is a wise ink, rather, as mentioned before, a mind over matter,
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19th Feb 2018 2:20pm
19th Feb 2018 2:20pm
19th Feb 2018 2:25pm
19th Feb 2018 2:29pm
well, that 'you' in that reply was not directed literally at you, rather a rhetorical/general one.
19th Feb 2018 3:39pm
Yes, "Damn the torpedoes..............."
or when necessary, Todd Beamer's called out "Let's Roll"
(Flight 93 on 9/11)
for if you have face it, do so with conviction.
Perhaps the poet feels, not wise ink, but
the sentiment speaks differently, especially
for the lesson left for others.
or when necessary, Todd Beamer's called out "Let's Roll"
(Flight 93 on 9/11)
for if you have face it, do so with conviction.
Perhaps the poet feels, not wise ink, but
the sentiment speaks differently, especially
for the lesson left for others.
19th Feb 2018 5:21pm
well,
my Friend there
is a generous soul! and yes The Wise one
who manages to see wisdom in the most unlikeliest of places.
And I do trust her wisdome and sight!
A massive note of Appreciation dear Friend!
yes, you you have to face it, do so with conviction. my goodness, you reduced the scribble to just one sentence!!
welcome
is the Friend!
Welcome
is her light, that shines bright!
always
:-)
my Friend there
is a generous soul! and yes The Wise one
who manages to see wisdom in the most unlikeliest of places.
And I do trust her wisdome and sight!
A massive note of Appreciation dear Friend!
yes, you you have to face it, do so with conviction. my goodness, you reduced the scribble to just one sentence!!
welcome
is the Friend!
Welcome
is her light, that shines bright!
always
:-)
19th Feb 2018 5:37pm
No.....not one sentence for the whole poem, just one stanza, which is shorter than the sentence.
Poem explains the reason, stanza..., the appropriate response.
I prefer the complete poem.
Poem explains the reason, stanza..., the appropriate response.
I prefer the complete poem.
19th Feb 2018 5:39pm
pardon my error riddled statement dear friend gracious
and graceful!
:-)
yes, the poem - she asked for it! ;-)
Thank You Teri!! Thank you!
and graceful!
:-)
yes, the poem - she asked for it! ;-)
Thank You Teri!! Thank you!
20th Feb 2018 8:56am
Love this piece, it describes so well how I've been feeling lately.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
21st Feb 2018 3:44pm
welcome
is the poet admired,
the Friend!
welcome
is the review affectionate!!
both held close!
appreciation.
immense!
is the poet admired,
the Friend!
welcome
is the review affectionate!!
both held close!
appreciation.
immense!
