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After-Prism
The moist pulp of your lips
sweet on mine, ripened melon
naturally fresh from the vine
after a lifetime of bitter fruit
artificially soured mash
of added sugar to taste
I've looked too long upon You
absorbing so much Love
strangers see You reflected
when I pass them by
as a vivid light leaves
an after-prism in the eyes
~
For My J 💜
The most patient, caring
man I'm blessed to Love
and be Loved by 💏
Always
sweet on mine, ripened melon
naturally fresh from the vine
after a lifetime of bitter fruit
artificially soured mash
of added sugar to taste
I've looked too long upon You
absorbing so much Love
strangers see You reflected
when I pass them by
as a vivid light leaves
an after-prism in the eyes
~
For My J 💜
The most patient, caring
man I'm blessed to Love
and be Loved by 💏
Always
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Re. After-Prism
Anonymous
15th Feb 2018 2:31am
That reminds me of how when couples live together for a long time, they supposedly start to act and look like one another.
I'm honored to be compared to light burned into darkness behind closed eyes.
Thank you! 🌈
I Love You! 💜💑💋
I'm honored to be compared to light burned into darkness behind closed eyes.
Thank you! 🌈
I Love You! 💜💑💋
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Re. After-Prism
15th Feb 2018 4:47am
Re. After-Prism
15th Feb 2018 8:57am
i know i've said it before
but ya'll are so freaking adorbs, i could just squish you.
a beautiful write, vati
xo
but ya'll are so freaking adorbs, i could just squish you.
a beautiful write, vati
xo
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Re. After-Prism
15th Feb 2018 10:51am
Re. After-Prism
17th Feb 2018 4:06am
such a beautiful expression of love - love is the answer to everything :-)))
excellent read and easy RL add :-))))))
excellent read and easy RL add :-))))))
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Anonymous
18th Feb 2018 6:59pm
Mmhhm
watch-out now, dont hurt nobody, lol!
..im loving the intimate seriousness and play..
worthy and tasteful my darling love
💖
watch-out now, dont hurt nobody, lol!
..im loving the intimate seriousness and play..
worthy and tasteful my darling love
💖
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Re: Re. After-Prism
18th Feb 2018 10:33pm
Worthy and tasteful of Love is all I desire!
Thank You, XVII Glorious Ones. 🌇💖
Thank You, XVII Glorious Ones. 🌇💖
Re. After-Prism
27th Feb 2018 10:55pm