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Daydreaming... (wishes)
Sway me into sweet butterscotch dreams...
This bitter coffee bean life
it keeps me painfully awake
Alive
Raw, unprepared was I
when pitchers of harrowing drinks
were brewed
with my very own tears
Give me the dreams I yearn
with all my heart
I wish to embrace sunrays ablaze
to bring overwhelming warmth of joy
to live
Love & intensity of mirthful reveries...
When heart is like a bluebird
singing alone
caged indoors of home
malnourished
Missing Love...
Strife for freedom
to fly in open fields of fantastical wonders
a fantasy it is
in which it only exists in mind
Blissful vibrancy of colors to inundate cynically shaded thoughts & heart...
Dreamscape
where landscapes of fairy-taled magic comes true
to dissolve of bitter tears
assuage sour taste of reality
Can we believe...
Can we believe these dreams are real?
It is real...
~Lost~
This bitter coffee bean life
it keeps me painfully awake
Alive
Raw, unprepared was I
when pitchers of harrowing drinks
were brewed
with my very own tears
Give me the dreams I yearn
with all my heart
I wish to embrace sunrays ablaze
to bring overwhelming warmth of joy
to live
Love & intensity of mirthful reveries...
When heart is like a bluebird
singing alone
caged indoors of home
malnourished
Missing Love...
Strife for freedom
to fly in open fields of fantastical wonders
a fantasy it is
in which it only exists in mind
Blissful vibrancy of colors to inundate cynically shaded thoughts & heart...
Dreamscape
where landscapes of fairy-taled magic comes true
to dissolve of bitter tears
assuage sour taste of reality
Can we believe...
Can we believe these dreams are real?
It is real...
~Lost~
Written by
SourMelon0313
(H)
Published 23rd Jan 2018
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Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
23rd Jan 2018 5:06am
very wistful H...everything starts in the mind...you've got me remembering Buddha's words....a stimulating poem...Lawrence
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:28am
Yes.. The mind..
the way you look at things and how it changes based upon them lol
Thank you dear Lawrence!
I am very grateful of your lovely visit.. :)
<3<3
H
the way you look at things and how it changes based upon them lol
Thank you dear Lawrence!
I am very grateful of your lovely visit.. :)
<3<3
H
Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
23rd Jan 2018 5:34am
Your heart hurts and the readers' hurt too.
Your dreams sre beautiful and sentimental...
So much relate to this write. I believe your love is not far away...
much love
RoseJasmine
Your dreams sre beautiful and sentimental...
So much relate to this write. I believe your love is not far away...
much love
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:30am
Thank you very much dear Jasmine...
your warm and comforting words
so kind..
I am very grateful :)
<3<3
H
your warm and comforting words
so kind..
I am very grateful :)
<3<3
H
Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
23rd Jan 2018 11:24am
Such a sadness to this...I hate that you feel like this sweetheart...praying one day soon your dreams will be reality...
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:32am
Dreams...
will be dreams
and reality... what I make it to be..
Hopefully all the dreamers out there will receive such prayers
as you so kindly gifted me with..
So much lovee<3<3
H
will be dreams
and reality... what I make it to be..
Hopefully all the dreamers out there will receive such prayers
as you so kindly gifted me with..
So much lovee<3<3
H
Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
23rd Jan 2018 1:51pm
The last word told me everything lost
Lost is a horrible place to be H
Hugs
Epic 😊
Lost is a horrible place to be H
Hugs
Epic 😊
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:33am
Yes, unfortunately I know too well
many has these feelings...
Thank you for the hug..
hugs back! <3
H
many has these feelings...
Thank you for the hug..
hugs back! <3
H
Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2018 8:36pm
This is so beautifully written Sour. Bravo!
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:34am
Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
23rd Jan 2018 11:42pm
Well it's been awhile since I've came across anything new from you. Probably not really that long but it seems like forever lol. You're great as always once again. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:35am
Oh Tyler..!
It brings me joy to see your visits upon my works..
Thank you so much for the support and love..
you write so well as well..
I wonder How you manage to write so much..
respects & love
<3<3
H
It brings me joy to see your visits upon my works..
Thank you so much for the support and love..
you write so well as well..
I wonder How you manage to write so much..
respects & love
<3<3
H
Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:46am
I have written two entire poetry books so I have a lot of material to pick from plus i'm writing my 3rd so i'm still writing new shit almost on a daily basis. I have a lot to get off my chest apparently lol.
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:49am
Whoa.. I get Ideas to write but I usually fail to finish because it does not come to be executed the way I'd hope it to be whenever the ideas visualize on paper...
Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 3:27am
I love creating art with my words so it just comes natural to me now. It's truly my passion in life.
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Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
beautiful poetess
a very lovely & magical write
I could see the dreamscapes
painted within this delightful verse..
love Crim
a very lovely & magical write
I could see the dreamscapes
painted within this delightful verse..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
25th Jan 2018 2:51am
Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
29th Jan 2018 8:28am
The imagery of flavors makes your dream taste real to me... But such bittersweet words make sweet butterscotch dreams into a river of loneliness... I feel your heart in this verse H!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
4th Feb 2018 10:13pm
Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
18th Feb 2018 00:23am
Your poem read to me like a person stranded on a desert island of life seeking love on a barren shore. The rich palette of emotions you painted makes for deeply satisfying poetry. I love to bask in your words and feel the depth of beauty which glows through the mists of sadness. There is much treasure for those who seek it in your gorgeous contemplations. This is a wistful expression of your gentle heart which shall surely find the love you seek.
Hugs,
John
Hugs,
John
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Re: Re. Daydreaming... (wishes)
You are wonderful..
those comforting words,
to be gifted in such warmth.
It's always so very assuring,
when another appreciate the depths... of
emotions which many finds it a waste of time
Love, is such dreamy thing...
H
those comforting words,
to be gifted in such warmth.
It's always so very assuring,
when another appreciate the depths... of
emotions which many finds it a waste of time
Love, is such dreamy thing...
H