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18th Jan 2018 7:52am
That second stanza really hit me in the feels, love the ending as well, so clever. Great pen, dear Grace.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
18th Jan 2018 10:33am
You are so kind...remarks like yours are always tremendous encouragement. Thank You.
18th Jan 2018 8:42pm
The transition might be painless and darkness, somehow, a comfort. It sometimes listens when nobody else will. Loved this poem, but the layout makes some words difficult to read. Fine work otherwise!
19th Jan 2018 12:17pm
Yes, the layout is not too good. Thanks for reading, Crowfly:) value your feedback as always.
5th Feb 2018 6:05am
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